Love Is Original Sight Of All Sight

Awesome POTD win, congrats,was chking out POTDs and found this great poem! Kudos!

Apologies for the delayed congrats on the POTD award, Paige; your writing is amazing.

Congrats on POTD, sweet Paige!

Paige, beautifully penned and congratulations on receiving the POTD honor ~

another unique piece from you, full of interesting images and phrasing..well deserved potd x

Back with congratulations for your POTD with this deep and moving poem

I’m back for a pat on your back ! Yeah, I c I often pinpoint a poem for POTD & it floats into the algorithm. I’m delighted ! This poem deserves it. X

' As it caught contact our glistening eyes — Long before unconscious heart ever knew. ' There's something so dreamy about this thought. Like two becoming one, in such a luminous way. Congratulations Paige, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

if this be love at first sight, you had me, paige! endearing , sensory write which deserves a POTD clinch...sweet congrats!

Thanks everyone for my congrats on POTD!! I will be getting back to each of you to comment. Lotsa love, <3

You are a passionate sonnet writer, a song of raw emotion, "Love is original sight of all sight" I'm drenched in their love, Paige. Congratulations on your Poem Of The Day!!! Elegance structured. Enjoyed :)

Congratulations on your POTD!

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Hello Paige Hind :-) Congratulations on your very nice Italian sonnet POTD! Have a wonderful day, with best regards.

outstanding poem, Paige! Truly beautifully penned with insight and care and a well-deserved POTD. Sorry I missed reading this poem earlier. Wishing you well

Dear Paige, back with an awesome Congratulations on POTD. Blessings, Daniel

So romantic! Congratulations on potd for your fine poem Paige!

Congratulations Paige on having received Poem of the day for your lovely poem… Beryl

Such a lovely thought this is, Paige. I don't see many Italian sonnets these days. Well done

The seagull metaphor…

Dear Paige, It is like love arriving before the body even knows what to call it, waves, glass, seagulls, all pulling at the seams. I like how the sonnet keeps circling the idea that sight isn’t just vision but recognition, almost pre-conscious. Excellent in all ways. Blessings, Daniel

The love and seascape you have painted here are beautiful, dear Paige.

Your Petrarchan sonnet is very well written. I admire the metaphors involving seagulls, waves, harpoons, and sails. A magnificent poem.

This is exquisite ! A masterpiece, Paige. I’m faving. First two lines are exotic. I’m delighted that the throat is unclenched > this depicts a massive victory > it doesn’t matter if the sound is like crying seagulls. Neither does it matter if the waves go unrequited. If it washes away the glass, that is pure Love. The D alliteration before visceral is powerful : an excellent juxtaposition in the two lines here - the final line in first stanza is a masterful articulation of infinity- excellent! I’m in resonance with the more gentle second stanza, except the final line : since my perception is that the heart comes first before eyes, viscerality, etc. This is a true Romantic Italian Sonnet, PH. I hope the POTD peeps with their algorithm ai see this one. Rainbows to the shattered glass into the Ocean. Xxx