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Love Hold

Come sit down and enjoy the hot quiet of this summer eve. Let the sweat pour from brow leaving nothing to vision but the sultry smell of summer. Breathe in the arid humidity and succumb to my love hold advancement. Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey Tenth Place Winner ~ "Etheree Me” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich June 30, 2010

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Date: 6/21/2010 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2010 7:16:00 PM
I love the flow of this poem. It's so charming with the succumbing of love's hold. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/20/2010 6:56:00 PM
No summer here yet, but I did enjoy the poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/20/2010 12:33:00 PM
The season comes alive through your words. Congratulations on being a winner in Andrea's contest. Enjoy your honor. I wish you many more. Karen
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Date: 6/20/2010 3:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your 10th place win in my etheree contest with this "Hot" poem! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/15/2010 4:15:00 PM
Great desciptive write that you have penned in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/15/2010 12:13:00 AM
like this one too! should do very well in contest harry
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Date: 6/14/2010 6:30:00 PM
Lovely etheree, sweet write, good luck on the contest...P.D.
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