Love Eternal


Never will I forget love gone away,
Your beautiful memory I will not betray;
Endless and unbroken my eternal weeping,
I will never stop coming with a rose bouquet.

Always in my mind you come creeping,
Till the end this sorrow is for my keeping;
Timeless and unfading this is a love divine,
Forevermore darling, of you I will be dreaming.

Sometimes, in my dreams we entwine,
One day it seemed your hand was in mine;
And you kissed my hair and red lips so sweetly,
This Valentines Day I will drink your favourite wine.

Never will I let go of love felt so deeply,
Always remembering how you loved greatly;
Sometimes, I think of meeting above one day,
With my heart bleeding, I trace your name lightly.

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February 10, 2016

Poetry/Rubaiyat/Love Eternal
Copyright Protected, ID 16-755-489-0
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 2/13/2016 8:32:00 AM
eternal love, you've got a strong heart dear BW, this is one excellent poem with awesome lovely words, best of luck in the contest
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Constance La France
Date: 2/13/2016 4:57:00 PM
Sage, thanks for the excellent and awesome, so appreciated !
Date: 2/11/2016 12:16:00 PM
Lovely and sad! Your mastery of forms is outstanding! Sorry I have not been around for a while--have been out of town.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/11/2016 12:37:00 PM
Thomas, thanks for visiting my poem and for the nice comment, appreciate. . .
Date: 2/11/2016 10:04:00 AM
forever Love will survive long after we think it dies because though at times it cries all because it greatly tries to brighten the light in our eyes by constantly filling the heart with the warmest surprise....very touching and heartfelt bw....;)
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Constance La France
Date: 2/11/2016 12:38:00 PM
Eric, thanks for visiting my poem with that nice comment, appreciate so much . . .
Date: 2/11/2016 9:42:00 AM
Heartfelt, lovely write, BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/11/2016 9:49:00 AM
James, thanks for the visit and the lovely !
Date: 2/11/2016 6:38:00 AM
Undying love with a beautiful memory. Very loving poem from a loving heart. Great read, B.W.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/11/2016 9:11:00 AM
Daniel, thanks for visiting and for the loving comment and the great !
Date: 2/10/2016 11:48:00 PM
impressed by this beautiful write, constance.. the whole pensive mood lingers on!.. huggs
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Constance La France
Date: 2/11/2016 9:13:00 AM
nette, your comment means so much to me, you are such a talented and skilled writer for you to be impressed, well it leaves me breathless, thank so much, hugs back .....
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