love, disordered -

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Gregory Richard Barden.

Related image

you hold my gaze fix upon my eyes and lips then back to my eyes 'Do you believe in chaos?' I ask 'No, Babe, I don't' 'That word is just a farce ...' 'Something we created to label the things' 'That are too complex for us to yet understand' I smile - you ask me why 'YOU are chaos', I say 'Sublimely chaotic' raking your fingers through my hair you cup the back of my head pull me toward you, firm and kiss me, letting your hair fall between our mouths I drink you in like salvation, divine lips, tresses, desires, tongues, thoughts swirling like molten madness WE ... are chaos. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Standard Contest 435" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Sponsor.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2018 6:50:00 PM

wow, this is some beautiful kind of chaos, Greg!! I see congrats on it, so it must have won some other contest then? It is awesome, and congrats for your win in the other contest. I hear it's a SILVER medal!!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/15/2018 8:56:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea - I'm pleased you liked this one, my friend! :-) <3

L. J. Carber

Date: 5/11/2018 8:18:00 AM

Congrats, Gregory, I especially liked the ending

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/16/2018 9:03:00 PM

Thank you very much, LJ! :-)

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/10/2018 1:36:00 PM

Lovely, Gregory. Congrats on your well deserved silver medal.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/16/2018 9:02:00 PM

Many thanks, my friend - blessings! :-) <3

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/8/2018 4:50:00 PM

Loved this piece. There is a madness to wanton love that intoxicates. This is a testament to that.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/8/2018 7:10:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Eileen, I so appreciate the kind words! You're right ... I think love makes us all a bit crazy at times, and wanton love pushes the extreme. Blessings! :-) <3