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on our wedding day huge dark clouds won’t bring me down I’m simply walking on air my large umbrella stops my tresses getting wet let the love rain down on me Fives and Sevens Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May Image 1 chosen 5,7,7,5,7,7 with how many syllables 7/8/19

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Date: 7/22/2019 9:18:00 AM
this is a fav...Beautiful.
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Date: 7/22/2019 5:49:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/22/2019 2:30:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this poetic reality about wedding day's bliss. God bless you.
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Date: 7/21/2019 6:37:00 PM
Gorgeous write Jan, love always sees things in a more beautiful way. Congrats on your win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 7/21/2019 5:06:00 PM
I love the rain Jan and I would look upon the rain as a blessing. You ended this superbly. I really loved your entry Jan. Congratulations on your podium win! xxoo
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Date: 7/21/2019 3:38:00 PM
Wonderful write Jan...Congrats on your win..
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Date: 7/12/2019 9:17:00 AM
Nice one my friend. I am wondering if it was really raining on your wedding day or if this is a fabrication that worked well here?
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Date: 7/10/2019 12:27:00 PM
Hi Jan, The photo and song works well with your poem. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/9/2019 10:21:00 AM
I think you penned a beauty for the contest, sometimes less is more, your words speak volumes! lovely poem :) hugs
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Date: 7/8/2019 6:52:00 PM
Nicely done. A very challenging contest to be sure. Have a great day my friend.
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Date: 7/8/2019 3:37:00 PM
Nice one Jan, nice pic too to go with your piece. Blessings always, Gordon
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Date: 7/8/2019 2:58:00 PM
It’s good to be prepared!
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Date: 7/8/2019 2:26:00 PM
jan - your poem goes beautifully with the photo. best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 7/8/2019 2:06:00 PM
- Rain means happiness on the anniversary, Jan :) - A lovely poem ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/8/2019 1:26:00 PM
Beautiful Jan. Well done :)
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Date: 7/8/2019 1:00:00 PM
Hello Jan, a romantic wedding poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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