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Love Eternal Crucified

Love lay lifeless carried by loving arms Sacred body Most Divine Sacrificial Lamb Emmanuel, Prince of Peace, Messiah Redeemer, Provider, Merciful, Protector King of Kings and Lord of Lords Love eternal crucified His mission completed The ransom paid in full Laborious agony was over Freely He had given His all Holding nothing back Love eternal crucified Love came to rescue fallen man Enslaved to wretched sin He exchanged His cloak of glory Assumed the massive cloak of sin In three days Love will arise Supreme ecstasy achieved Entry into Raul's "The Deposition" Contest

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Douglas Ace

Date: 12/7/2009 4:00:00 PM

Very engaging piece, Audrey. Love the line, "Love came to rescue fallen man". You have very uniquely written of the Redeemed . GReat job Lightwalker

John Freeman

Date: 12/7/2009 8:37:00 AM

Loving sentiment to our Lord and Savior, Audrey. I love the respect you've shown here. Sincerely, Love, Moses

P Sheart

Date: 12/6/2009 8:33:00 PM

Audrey, A Very strong message, your devotion to your faith is admirable. Will make a wonderful entry,best wishes in Raul's contest. Love Light Patty

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/6/2009 2:52:00 PM

the price was paid. john

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/6/2009 1:07:00 PM

Wonderfully written piece you have penned here and I love the last two lines..power packed message! Thanks so much for sharing and for your kind comments~ Mary

James Fraser

Date: 12/6/2009 12:47:00 PM

Eternal Ekphrasis Audrey, superbly written and a well worthy entry into Raul's contest >> good luck to you >> James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/6/2009 12:00:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this excellent poem. Keep the testimonal writes coming. Thanks for the comments on my works. Sara

Katherine Stella

Date: 12/6/2009 5:33:00 AM

this looks like a winner to me makes me wonder if I should redo mine now for my may be short lol sadden imagery here but yet beautiful that had to be hard on his greiving mother to have her sons lie dead in her arms thanks for sharing and for your kind comments on my work also blessings and happy holidays

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/5/2009 4:22:00 PM

This is a very loving poem to and about our Lord. Starting immediately with the first verse, it beckons the reader to contemplate and from there one may fall easily into meditation and "listening to our Lord." Thank you for this. I will surely return to it. -Robert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/5/2009 3:04:00 PM

The title is captivating and the excellent poem is a tribute to your faith, Audrey. I really llike the way you mention so many of the titles used to describe Christ in the first verse. A great entry for the contest! Good luck. Love, Carolyn

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/5/2009 2:38:00 PM

Great entry for the contest, and good luck! Beautifully written ~Juliane

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/5/2009 1:23:00 PM

beautiful words and inspiration, full of faith! thanks for sharing.

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/5/2009 12:55:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this lovely poem of inspiration, Audrey! ~ Love, Carrie