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Love From My Poem Cemetery Does It Suck

If I were a bird love would be my wings My flock would be of hip hop Allow me to cruise sky blue white streams Without fear of flying treetops And oh the blackbird songs I prophetically sing Would I sing just as lovers do Mating season is never in winter time Yet frostbitten love warms a fool Romantic rendezvous red as fine wine Love peaks primes we win and lose If I was a cave would you explore All my dark places to find peace Would you have amber hope for Love inside of both of us deep What do you dream of amour If I was a dream I would be odd Feverish romantic and enchanting I would feel like holy love of God With all souls delighted dancing We would see the heavens and stars Alas I am but a human poet Using my heart as a green vase If I didn’t say would you know it Love is my garden and faith plants the seeds of eternity hope is.

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Date: 12/9/2023 12:19:00 PM
What a fun/creative write. Love it... I wish you would write more. Have a blessed day writing away................
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/9/2023 4:37:00 PM
Hi Paula! I have been driving out of town for piano lessons to further reach my musical composition goals. I want to get back to my song writing. So I'm not here as much sorry. Thanks for the love. Hugs.
Date: 10/17/2023 1:20:00 AM
Karen, Poem doesn't suck & the words invoke so much in me. All of it. Last verse is touching & wonderfully sums it up. Think you are a brilliant poet, so wanted to let you know I honestly have ADHD, which means I don't comment on most poems in PoetrySoup. Or on my friend's posts on social media. lol You are the rare poet where I've enjoyed every poem I've read of the poet. You are truly amazing. Never forget that & know I love your poems. Take care, Cindy
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Cindy Bahl
Date: 10/17/2023 1:49:00 AM
Hi Karen, wanted to let you know that when I posted that initial comment, I kept realizing mistakes in my wording (only after posting it each time), and kept editing the comment & saving it. I'm so sorry about that! Take care and, again, love your poems!!!
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/17/2023 1:44:00 AM
oops my comment is below...but thanks
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/17/2023 1:43:00 AM
Cindy I am honored you commented on my poems. You are courageous in not letting your ADHD stop you. I really had forgotten about this poem. I was suppose to rewrite it and take it down but I suppose even if flawed it can show I too struggle with this poetry thing. It really is a great honor that you and others see value where it escapes me. Go figure. lol Hugs love and light to you.
Date: 10/10/2023 1:41:00 AM
Emotions, imagery and dreams are a concoction of first-class poetry. Wonderful poetry. Blessings.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/10/2023 1:49:00 AM
Oops my comment is below but thanks!
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/10/2023 1:48:00 AM
WOW I appreciate that Victor. Thanks. I guess even flawed poetry can have an audience. Hugs and blessings.
Date: 10/9/2023 7:21:00 PM
My vote is for you as a cave, Karen. That was an intriguing, tantalizing stanza, methinks. ~ Gershon
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/9/2023 7:31:00 PM
Well I cringe when I look at this one. It is imperfect. I will either fix it or take it down. Lol but thanks.
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