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Love - Reverse Contest

Love in reverse? She had lain Hair like a halo About her pillow Had awaited her lover Pleasing her soul Kissing and nibbling Crying out in passion Now, yes now, Bodies entwined Swaying to lovers music Sensually to the beat of the heart With crescendo's of release. Immortal endless love Complete Reverse Contest - read it backwards as well Penned 11 August 2013

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/17/2013 11:37:00 PM

Very well done, loved this one!

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/18/2013 12:20:00 AM

Thank you. Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2013 3:21:00 PM

Seren, I really like this, but I feel like I must be getting it all wrong. I was trying to read it from the very final word and go all the way backwards word by word instead of line by line. I need to find out what he means. If we can do it backward by LINES, it won't be nearly as difficult as I imagined!! GOOD job.

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/12/2013 4:05:00 PM

you can read it line by line backwards and it makes sense mostly(lol)

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/12/2013 3:58:00 PM

awww dont say that i did it line by line. dont fancy re-writing it. let me know what you find out.please...Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/12/2013 11:04:00 AM

This is a beautiful and wonderful write here my friend! I truly loved reading this harmonious poem this afternoon! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/12/2013 12:32:00 PM

Thsnks Russell, hlad you enjoyed it ....Seren