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Lost September

September of my youth. Romance – a rose - bloomed larger and more beautifully than all other roses I had ever seen or that I’ve yet to ever see again! To gaze on him was heaven, and his eyes would gaze with tenderness into my own. I let my fingers trace his face; his skin was petal-smooth as I inhaled the scent of his cologne. A passion in my soul was flowering! I opened up to him. Red buds were his two lips and kissed with dew! How sweet their taste! That taste I’d never known to be so sweet before that moon-glow night. No thorns had he – at least none I could see. I held him close to me – that long-stemmed rose so elegant! He stirred inside of me a deep and dulcet longing; nonetheless, my innocence remained intact, for I was young, and he was bound to go away back to his native land. How brief our time! It was so brief I did not know it then, but never would the month when I was born come back to me just quite as sweetly as it came that year when I turned seventeen. Oh, precious lost September of my youth. I never would again see moon and stars shine quite as brightly as they did that night inside the eyes of one *beloved rose! *Beloved pronounced with three syllables to keep blank verse. Date Written: Oct. 17, 2019 Writing Challenge 2, November - A Poem Meaningful Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wisshkobi Odem

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Date: 11/20/2019 6:00:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 11/20/2019 3:51:00 PM
Andrea congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautifully penned poem!
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Date: 11/6/2019 3:34:00 PM
Congratulations on you win. Great Job. Your pen was writing love not ink.....
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Date: 11/6/2019 7:13:00 AM
Congrats Andrea... Much love and appreciation for your talented pen, Gina
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Date: 11/5/2019 7:08:00 PM
This was a beautiful write, Andrea! Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 11/5/2019 6:32:00 PM
A truly great poem with exquisite imagery, Andrea:-) I love the rose metaphor used throughout the poem! Heartiest congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 10/20/2019 2:00:00 PM
I like this poem, Andrea. The memories of past love cast spells on us.
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Date: 10/19/2019 11:57:00 PM
Ah first love. A remembrance the one that got away. The one you never forget. A wise man once said the best love affairs are the ones that only happen in your mind. Great job here my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/18/2019 11:46:00 PM
Such a beautifully romantic poem my friend. Love it :) hugs
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Date: 10/18/2019 10:42:00 PM
Wow, this is so tender, my friend. Never heard a man spoken of as a rose prior to this, but why shouldn't he be? Such a special memory to share and a beautiful write ~ kudos <3
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Date: 10/18/2019 8:02:00 PM
Beautiful, Andrea. Such a romantic moment expressed so sweetly. Blessings and love to you, Gina
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Date: 10/18/2019 6:27:00 PM
Hello Andrea … each line is written like a line in a sonnet, but it's not a sonnet, but a wonderful verse to read - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 10/18/2019 6:31:00 PM
thanks, Lindsay That's all blank verse is, the sound of a sonnet without rhyme!
Date: 10/18/2019 9:53:00 AM
Andrea, I like your poem held high on the wings of a September love. Roses of youth so cherished now. -Richard
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Date: 10/18/2019 8:59:00 AM
Sweet romantic poem here. Our time is fleeting but you have grabbed onto a moment magnificently here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/18/2019 8:04:00 AM
Beautifully enchanting Andrea. This has love written all over it. It gets a sigh from me. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 10/18/2019 7:59:00 AM
Passionate..romantic..moments to cherish and reminisce.
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Date: 10/18/2019 7:22:00 AM
You weave a beautiful story of a first love, Andrea, I believe we all have such a story. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
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Date: 10/18/2019 7:12:00 AM
- A wonderful romantic poem, Andrea - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/17/2019 10:20:00 PM
I love the rose metaphor woven throughout. This is beautiful.
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Date: 10/17/2019 10:10:00 PM
Such a lovely romantic piece... Excellent my friend... applause... Ann
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Date: 10/17/2019 9:29:00 PM
Roses always seem to fade in September...A nostalgic write Andrea, GL in the contest..
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Date: 10/17/2019 9:11:00 PM
A lovely write! Moment’s can last a lifetime.
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