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Lost Love

Not once, but twice, death stole his love away; lost love- how he encountered its deep pain. The first- when kids were young, she left one day; dark, furtive, death from cancer was to blame. Lost love, lost friend, lost mother of his young; ascetic life brought shallow, lonely years. His only joy- his children; still, he clung to nonchalant, dark emptiness, and tears. Years later, love did visit him once more. With children grown- his heart now mended some, her humble kindness he could not ignore. But, lasting love for him would never come. They married- but, before three years had passed- her death- lost love- new tragedy recast. January 20, 2018 ~7th Place~ Premiere Contest: Your Finest Sonnet Sponsor: Mark Massey Judged: 07/26/2018 ~3rd Place~ Contest: Lost Love Sponsor: John Hamilton Judged: 02/11/2018 ~3rd Place~ Contest: Some Broken Hearts Never Mend Sponsor: Faraz Ajmal Required words used in order of appearance: Furtive Ascetic Shallow Nonchalant Humble

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Date: 7/28/2018 5:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Sad beautiful sonnet. Well done!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/30/2018 8:15:00 AM
Thank you once again, Susan, for your lovely visits and support. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/27/2018 3:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Sandra. I enjoyed reading this well written sonnet. Hugs Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/27/2018 8:52:00 PM
I am so pleased that you enjoyed my Sonnet, Eve. Thank you for that and your lovely comment and congrats. Hugs, Eve
Date: 7/27/2018 11:28:00 AM
I have known people that sadly had this occur in their lives. A beautifully composed sonnet deserving of your placement Sandra! Congratulations!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/27/2018 8:53:00 PM
Yes, Connie, it is very sad when this happens. Thank you for your lovely comment and congratulations. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/12/2018 6:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Szndra, nicely done and enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/12/2018 8:40:00 PM
Hi, Eve, thank you so much for your congrats and very supportive comment and congrats. Always, so much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/12/2018 2:19:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/12/2018 8:39:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line. Your visits and kind comments are always appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/11/2018 10:10:00 PM
The pain, the suffering, the tragedy---all so poignantly expressed in this 14-line masterpiece. Congrats on your well-deserved winner! Best wishes, Gershon Wolf
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/12/2018 8:39:00 PM
Thank you so much for your visit, Gershon, and for your very supportive and positive comments and congrats. Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 2/11/2018 7:04:00 PM
Superbly expressed sadness Sandra. Such perfect rhythm and amazing rhymes moved me through your beautiful sonnet on lovely waves of melancholy. The required words melted effortlessly into the elegance of your poem. Big congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes and hugs. ~Susan
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/12/2018 8:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Your beautifully expressed comments are a blessing to read with your very uplifting and supportive words. Thanks again, dear friend. Warm wishes and hugs back to you. Sandra
Date: 2/11/2018 2:22:00 PM
Sandra, back to say congrats on your placement. John
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/11/2018 3:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, John! Sandra
Date: 2/11/2018 1:40:00 PM
Loved this sad tale Sandra, congrats on a fine 3rd place, well done!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/11/2018 3:36:00 PM
Another fine contest, John! Thank you for my fine placement! Sandra
Date: 2/1/2018 4:17:00 PM
Sandra, I can feel the emotion in this one, nicely written. Best of luck. John
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/1/2018 7:35:00 PM
Thank you, John, for your visit and very kind comments. I am so pleased that you enjoyed reading it. Sandra :)
Date: 1/21/2018 4:41:00 PM
Emotional write. Very well done, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/22/2018 8:07:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/21/2018 8:37:00 AM
Great story telling with your well executed sonnet, Sandra. And it's so sad. Good luck in the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/22/2018 8:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Agnes. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/21/2018 2:01:00 AM
Your well written poem tells such a sad story Sandra. I have a second cousin this happened to. He never remarried after his second loss. Instead he created beautiful wood carvings. I have one that is a life like looking humming bird. Beautiful! : )
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/22/2018 8:06:00 PM
Thank you, Connie. Actually, this is a true story based on my husband's cousin. So sad indeed. Thank you for your positive and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra

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