Lost Love

In painful goodbyes, how could I ain’t cry? Think that lovebirds are always free to fly. If promises are broken, who’s to blame? To point him, more fingers on me---my shame. Is it better to accept and move on? That’s true, it’s everybody’s opinion. If love is lost, how can I find again? Take time to search while enjoying with friends. Sept. 2, 2022 10.03pm PS Syllable Counter Syllables Per Line: 10 10 0 10 10 0 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 80

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/8/2022 12:00:00 PM

Good job Len. You took you're sad, sorrowful break up and, with the addition of your last couplet, turned this work into a positive, uplifting poem! Linda

Len Gasun
Date: 9/9/2022 10:36:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind and uplifting words my dear friend Linda. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 9/2/2022 3:25:00 PM

Smart choice you express through you poetry my friend. Be with friends, take time to find love. Have a great weekend, Len. Hugs, Bill

Len Gasun
Date: 9/2/2022 7:15:00 PM

I couldn't think another topic for this that will make up the same syllable for each line my dear friend Bill. Breaking Up was my first title but when I've written the last couplet, I decided to change. Thank you very much again for your thoughtful visit, reading my poem and uplifting comments. More blessings to you my dear friend. Hugs