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Lost In Your Love - Collaboration With White Wolf

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As deep as oceans are in thy blue eyes I ponder to myself: where have I been Lost in your love, a bird in your high skies A poor blind man I was, but now I've seen Truth lies behind your eyes that I can see Alone. I don't roam this earth without you, For we are one, and one we'll always be So darling take my heart, take my hand too. And though your eyes stare without seeing me They see much deeper than eyes ever could They see deep in my heart where I am free And where we live together, long and good No ocean separates the love we feel We're birds, our universe is vast and real *** Iambic Pentameter March 21, 2017 Copyright © White Wolf and Darren White

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Doug Vinson

Date: 3/23/2017 2:58:00 PM

I love the enthusiasms you both have. Heck, I love you both. I really love the ending of this poem. The picture - ha! Talk about some luminous blues. Lifelong favorite-color-is-blue dude here.

Darren White
Date: 3/23/2017 3:14:00 PM

Thanks Doug :D And yeah, that colour is beautiful, isn't it?

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 3/23/2017 10:55:00 AM

A beautiful sonnet by the cool duo of the White team (nice moniker, Sara.) You fellas sure know how to sway the heartstrings. A lovely poem, Darren and Rick, no doubt about that. A 7 for sure. Love and peace.

Darren White
Date: 3/23/2017 1:35:00 PM

Thank you so very much Freddie, also for the 7 :)

Sara Ella

Date: 3/22/2017 9:43:00 PM

The white team writes again and it is a wonderful poem :) This one seems very fitting for you Darren <3 I love the line "take my heart, take my hand too."

Darren White
Date: 3/23/2017 1:33:00 PM

The White brothers strike again lol. Thanks Sara :)

Chris Green

Date: 3/22/2017 7:26:00 AM

They're back and just as great as ever. This was beautiful my two friends, when you two write together it is always something wonderful and amazing we find. The love in this poem really soars and those last two lines are perfect.

Darren White
Date: 3/22/2017 7:39:00 AM

Thank you Chris. It's wonderful to write with Budgie :) And yeah, no matter the distance, love can conquer it.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/22/2017 5:38:00 AM

aww what a lovely romantic sonnet guys - you should dedicate it to your boo Darren:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White
Date: 3/22/2017 6:21:00 AM

My boo gets his fair share of poems from me, often ones I do not post ;) Thanks Jan HUGS

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/22/2017 4:44:00 AM

Good Morning Darren and White Wolf too. There are no words for this. I am in awe of its poetic beauty. The wonderful Sonnet is all dressed up and ready to show. Congratulations to you both for your collaboration and creation. This was a beautiful way to start the morning. It was a pleasure to turn to this. Well done entirely.

Darren White
Date: 3/22/2017 4:47:00 AM

Thank you Lisa, you have always such beautiful words for our poems, I am honoured and humbled. I am glad I could start your day in a good way :)

White Wolf

Date: 3/22/2017 4:37:00 AM

The spreading of our poetic wings! Always a pleasure writing with you, Duir!

White Wolf
Date: 3/22/2017 5:01:00 AM

Love it! /|\

Darren White
Date: 3/22/2017 4:41:00 AM

It's lovely, and always a pleasure working together Budgie! How do you like the picture?