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Lost In the Mist - Contest

It came sailing out of the misty hue Moving slowly across the horizon A ghost like ship silent without a crew Not a sound is heard or movement upon It came close to shore so had a good view Could see stores and private items upon Can just read the name painted on the bow Bel Amica i read filled me with awe. Penned 24 August 2014 by Seren Roberts Context: Through the Mist..

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/31/2014 11:31:00 PM

covertly impressive, seren... i like how this ble me away.. thank you for gracing my contest and congrats!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/30/2014 12:44:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Seren:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/24/2014 2:19:00 AM

Wow the mystery ! Oh I love it Seren! Good luck!

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/24/2014 3:16:00 AM

Thanks Dr Upma ...Seren

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/23/2014 10:23:00 PM

Full of mystery and intrigue. To keep sailing or remain tethered to security. Very pertinent question. Good luck in the contest, Seren

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/24/2014 2:15:00 AM

Sorry had to delete second verse

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/23/2014 8:17:00 PM

very well written. thank you.

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/24/2014 9:44:00 AM

maybe you should post the full version separate and not for the contest. you could use the same title adding "uncut". i love your words and i hate the thought of them sitting in limbo unattended.

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/24/2014 3:15:00 AM

Thanks Maurice I wrote a second verse, but was pointed out Just one required....Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 8/23/2014 7:02:00 PM

Seren I interpreted the rules as Nette wanting one 8 line poem only :-) Hugs Jan x

Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2014 2:35:00 AM

Wow Seren you have nailed it ! Made me have a shiver down my spine with the images you created - why not add the second verse after the contest has closed and re post the poem as version 2! Hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/24/2014 2:13:00 AM

Your right Jan hmmm how do I condense this lol