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Flee far away to a place that is calling for me. Walking, bursting with pleasure, being a new person, lost in peaceful reverie, with treasured memories. Free to carry on with my life and breathe for certain. Walking, bursting with pleasure, being a new person with an unspoiled heart with no doubts or fears, a new start. Free to carry on with my life and breathe for certain. Bathing under a clear blue sky before it departs. With an unspoiled heart with no doubts or fears, a new start lost in peaceful reverie, with treasured memories. Bathing under a clear blue sky before it departs. Flee far away to a place that is calling for me. 7/6/2017 Not for contest

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Date: 7/6/2017 1:52:00 PM
This was beautifully done Eve and such a comforting and soothing poem to read. Very nice my friend.
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Date: 7/6/2017 12:46:00 PM
a refreshing brushstroke of paradise, eve... you haver a way with words; so lovely!.. huggs
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Date: 7/6/2017 10:50:00 AM
I want to go, Mrs Eve. I hear it calling me, too. Great write!!!
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Date: 7/6/2017 8:14:00 AM
The pantoum form allows you to repeat the most calming lines, Eve. I wish I had such a peaceful sanctuary.
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Date: 7/6/2017 7:04:00 AM
lovely and delightful ...
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Date: 7/6/2017 3:57:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Eve - Sounds peacefully :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/6/2017 1:24:00 AM
I see you have found your paradise on earth my friend, Eve! Delightful and upliftin!
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Date: 7/6/2017 1:07:00 AM
What a peaceful place you have created Eve. Who would not be tempted to enter this heavenly realm? I love some of the lines you have used here, so well crafted...Maria
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