Lost In Melody

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cuckoo's sweet warbling across the woods and meadows it's gently wafting — as the lilts caress my ears, I look for Keats' Nightingale October.31.2022 A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/31/2022 4:55:00 PM

What a wonderful way to end your poem! Love it! You are so talented!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/31/2022 11:24:00 AM

As a small boy, I was captivated by a bird's song, never saw it, and no one knew what it was when I imitated its call, but I have never forgotten how cheerful it was. Enjoyed, Valsa! Aloha!

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/31/2022 11:05:00 AM

I really enjoyed this poem Tanka, Valsa. Your work has a lovely and captivating tone. Wonderful image and diction. Blessing dear friend

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/31/2022 8:04:00 AM

Great poem. Loved the reference to the nightingale.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/31/2022 5:28:00 AM

Melodious write, Valsa. Great ending line. A FAVE poem. Best to you.