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Lost In Japan

Origami soul
Pressed in rice paper tightly
A tomb of beauty
Memory of Geisha's heart
Tsunami tears in albums...

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/17/2011 8:05:00 PM

Exquisite! Congratulations on your deserving win Iolanda.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/3/2011 9:27:00 PM

So delicate and lovely. I'm happy for your win.

Iolanda Scripca
Date: 8/3/2011 10:10:00 PM

Thank you, Elisabeth!

Cyent D

Date: 8/1/2011 3:13:00 PM

I Love how u wrote this poem. how simply beautiful

Iolanda Scripca
Date: 8/3/2011 10:10:00 PM

Thank you, Cyent!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/19/2011 1:50:00 PM

Iolanda. This is my first exposure to your poetry-one of the best tankas ever! Saving this emotion-packed write to my favorites! Congrats-keep on 'writing. Gwendolen

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 4/10/2011 10:15:00 AM

Hi Iolanda-So much expressed in so few words.Sad yet beautiful and a worthy winner.Congratulations.Love June(Sylvia)

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 3/31/2011 3:30:00 PM

Congrats Iolanda on being one of the winners in the Poetry Soup contest. Vince

Elaine George

Date: 3/31/2011 5:26:00 AM

Many congrats on your WIN! dear Iolanda. I knew it was a winner the first time I read it. Elaine

Constance La France

Date: 3/30/2011 1:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the international contest~~

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/30/2011 10:33:00 AM

Dear Iolanda, Congratulations on your amazing 3rd Place win in PS's Intl. Contest! I am truly happy for you, but not surprised as you are one of the best here on Soup! Love, Annalise

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/30/2011 6:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your 3rd place win in the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest Iolanda. I enjoyed reading your poem again this morning. Love, Carol