Lost In Japan

Origami soul
Pressed in rice paper tightly
A tomb of beauty
Memory of Geisha's heart
Tsunami tears in albums...

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 8:05 PM
Exquisite! Congratulations on your deserving win Iolanda.
Wesley Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 9:27 PM
So delicate and lovely. I'm happy for your win.
Scripca Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 10:10 PM
Thank you, Elisabeth!
D Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 3:13 PM
I Love how u wrote this poem. how simply beautiful
Scripca Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 10:10 PM
Thank you, Cyent!
Song Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 1:50 PM
Iolanda. This is my first exposure to your poetry-one of the best tankas ever! Saving this emotion-packed write to my favorites! Congrats-keep on 'writing. Gwendolen
Coulstock Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 10:15 AM
Hi Iolanda-So much expressed in so few words.Sad yet beautiful and a worthy winner.Congratulations.Love June(Sylvia)
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 3:30 PM
Congrats Iolanda on being one of the winners in the Poetry Soup contest. Vince
George   Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 5:26 AM
Many congrats on your WIN! dear Iolanda. I knew it was a winner the first time I read it. Elaine
La France Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 1:45 PM
Congratulations on your win in the international contest~~
Haick Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 10:33 AM
Dear Iolanda, Congratulations on your amazing 3rd Place win in PS's Intl. Contest! I am truly happy for you, but not surprised as you are one of the best here on Soup! Love, Annalise
Brown Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 6:11 AM
Congratulations on your 3rd place win in the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest Iolanda. I enjoyed reading your poem again this morning. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 6:50 PM
Congratulations Iolanda on your big win in the Soups contest. A great honor and your poem is delightful. Love, Joyce
George   Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 3:44 AM
Heart wrenching Tanka, Iolanda. Many congrats on this feature of the week. Elaine
Mehta Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 3:21 PM
Congratulations on your poem on tsunami being featured this week, Iolanda
Brown Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 5:51 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Iolanda. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2011 at 10:33 PM
wonderful and how nice you have two in the finals still!
Ahmad Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 2:02 AM
congrats!
K. Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 8:37 AM
oh wow, this is just wonderfully descriptive, Iolanda :) beautiful, beautiful write -- Congrats on your win -- nikko :)
Augustus Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 2:11 PM
Really, really like the flow of this and I was completely in love with your last line! Congratulations on your win!
Richards Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 6:23 PM
I love the originality of this one!! Well done, Iolanda!! Congratulations! ~ Carrie
Mehta Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 5:20 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest, Iolanda
Fraser Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 1:48 PM
Many congratulations Iolanda on your win in Rick's fine contest with this super Tanka >> James
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 4:47 AM
Congratulations Iolanda on your win in Rick Parise's contest "A Memory Of Beauty". Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 8:38 PM
very unique. congratulations. Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 7:27 PM
VEry interesting one, Iolanda. A big congrats to you. Luv, Andrea
R Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 10:32 AM
Wow, this is outstanding, Iolanda. I'm so found of the Japanese culture. Beautifully written..Emilia
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