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She used to walk alone down dirt roads in absence of pavement and streetlights She used to wander through summer evenings, cicada symphonies nocturnal sounds of animal happenings She used to lie alone on her back, in the grass silent among the trees while scaffolds tossed new nightlights into the July sky watching a scattered sky, waiting for stars to lose their grip She could always predict where the next one would fall She used to walk alone through the midnight world of longings and wonder what happened to the expectation of horizons bright with dreams Grieving over postscripts of summer memories

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/3/2009 7:25:00 AM
Hello Carrie, thanks for your comment on Pamphlets of Prophets.... I found this poem to have a lingering sadness, as if someone where thinking back to more content and dreamier days which are now missed... or lost. The imagery is gentle and lends a certain pining air to the poem........... beautifully written
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Date: 1/1/2009 12:02:00 AM
Like the kyrielle flavour o this one Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/31/2008 11:59:00 AM
Hope all of her dreams have come true. A very beautiful write. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/30/2008 5:48:00 PM
Very beautiful poem Carrie - Especially loved the ending - Hope 2009 brings many blessings to you and yours - god Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/30/2008 5:10:00 PM
Oh, I do love this one! The third part with its scattered stars about to lose their grip is especially wonderful! Beautiful poetry! Thank you so much for your comment on my poem "'Wild Child' Wind" and for all your support in the past year. I hope your New Year will be a joyful one! ~Juliane
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Date: 12/30/2008 4:48:00 PM
Ahhh, me too. :) Now, I walk with 10 hands grasping my skirt. :) It's all good. lovely lovely lovely poem! Love, Kristin
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Date: 12/30/2008 4:28:00 PM
It sounds like a lovely memory. Great imagery. The last two lines are perfect. I like the way it feels. May all our "horizons bright with dreams" in the coming year. Great write, Carrie! Love, Robin
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