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Thank you Tim, big (((HUGS))) for you

This pen, it writes, It has a life of its own. My hand a robot, No life on its own, It just had to be done. This pen, it writes, My life in words, That cannot be spoken, That cannot be heard, Not understood. Read these words, Tell this story In your words and images. Because I cannot. Fill in the blanks For I cannot. Tell the story of two little boys to yourself. This is no end, It is a beginning. One day this here boy Will find And embrace you, .....Little One..... *** Februari 6, 2017 © Darren White

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 6/21/2017 4:04:00 AM

Extraordinarily poignant story in this series, and a tough (but healing) place to return to, I imagine ... each a delicate, beautiful, and bitter morsel, and the meal an empowering message of victory ... I pray your Little One and you have reconnected, but if not I will pray for that end. This was a joyous and touching ride. Thank you, my friend. Much love and respect. Another fav, (there are many of yours on my list). <3

Darren White
Date: 6/21/2017 4:12:00 AM

Thank you my friend... It was good to read this series again through your eyes. Also thank you for the fav!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/8/2017 8:39:00 AM

Again, brilliant and touching. A Fav!

Darren White
Date: 3/8/2017 8:45:00 AM

I am very grateful that you read all of my story. Thank you again for the fav :)

Sara Ella

Date: 3/6/2017 7:52:00 PM

I hope that the day comes soon for you and your Little One to meet again <3 It is a powerful message you send in this one - we need to tell the story! Well done! <3 Darren <3

Darren White
Date: 3/6/2017 11:48:00 PM

I hope so too Sara <3

White Wolf

Date: 3/6/2017 7:30:00 PM

Such a fitting ending to the series, Duir! As Carol mentioned, you are a brave and remarkable person! As heavy as my heart feels right now, you still kept light shining through your work, which in its own rights must have been hard! You are a brilliant writer mate!

Darren White
Date: 3/6/2017 11:48:00 PM

I am sorry I upset you Budgie.... I didn't mean to. But thank you my friend.

Carol B.

Date: 3/6/2017 6:44:00 PM

Darren, You truly are brave and such a remarkable person. As I have told you before your writing blows me away. You have an important voice which needs to be heard. Hugs!

Darren White
Date: 3/6/2017 11:46:00 PM

Thank you so very much for saying this Carol, I am glad it didn't send you away screaming.......

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/6/2017 8:43:00 AM

Darren , I just read through the series you wrote. So very well done. Excellent!

Darren White
Date: 3/6/2017 8:53:00 AM

Heidi, thank you :)

Chris Green

Date: 3/6/2017 8:18:00 AM

This was an amazing series Darren. Through pain and pen light is found, a pathway to the future, where bright erases fright and smiles lead the way.

Darren White
Date: 3/6/2017 8:23:00 AM

Thank you for reading this entire series, Chris. I hope it wasn't too difficult? Yes, I am still fighting for a good future for myself, and for him as well.

Tim Smith

Date: 3/6/2017 7:36:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this beautiful story. It touched my heart.

Darren White
Date: 3/6/2017 7:40:00 AM

Thank you Tim, this series was the hardest write in my poetry-life, and I am still not sure if it was a wise decision, but now that it is here for all to read, I do agree that it is beautiful. And I want to thank you for your support the entire way.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/6/2017 4:58:00 AM

Dear Darren. I read your 1 and 2 entry. I skipped over 3 and 4 and went straight to your finale in this series. Why you ask. The answer is simple. I find it emotional when thinking of abuse when thinking of a fallen angel. I also find it close to home. Be proud of your expressed thoughts and keep them in a safe place. As I stated before bless The Little One always. Have a good morning and keep expressing.

Darren White
Date: 3/6/2017 5:02:00 AM

Dear Lisa, never read things that are difficult! You are right in skipping. You have a good morning too :)