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We thought our life was happy, smiling like we knew a joke; it all started when we said- I do honey, lovely words we each spoke. Our love was so amazing like a story perfect romance, people often would remark how we were always smiling; now, I walk life in a trance, in this sadness drowning; the end had come to our happy dance. I remember the day, so well we buried our baby, your face was etched in stone like a statue; you stood apart leaning against a tree, we buried him with a teddy bear blue. Why did I feel that I had to say sorry? At the end, I sang him a lullaby to take up to heaven, you took my hand and we walked away weeping; after that we did not smile- our life barren, our love creeping. When I looked at you my hopes were beaten, the fun was over and we were sinking; death had come to us and he had won, my heart was aching. It was not long before you left me, you crashed your car into a ravine in a winter storm; and the story ended- my tears could fill the deep blue sea, you had your freedom . . . I remember the funeral, yes the day love- I did bury, goodbye handsome; now, I have learned to recall only the beauty. __________________________ December 3, 2017 Poetry/Rhyme/'losing my love' Copyright Protected, ID 17-9683-02-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym.

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Date: 12/19/2017 6:26:00 AM
I feel the sadness and longing in your lines Constance, a mark of a great writer to draw the reader in, getting them to share in your poignant words. Bravo my friend and thank you for entering my contest. You were one of the HMs, a big Congratulations...Maria
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Date: 12/13/2017 10:16:00 AM
Such a sad and tragic write Broken Wings. I feel the heart wrenching tragedy in your words. ~ Judy
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Date: 12/12/2017 7:45:00 PM
Wow, wow wow... this was heart wrenching. I love it. Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 12/3/2017 10:02:00 PM
Broken Wings, your write aches with the sadness of a shattered soul with a broken heart. Good luck in the contest..
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Date: 12/3/2017 9:22:00 PM
Enjoyed the read! A very sad write!
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