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Lord I Pantoum You- Revised For Contest

Lord I pantoum you, giver of the Light, Creator of everything both great and small. If not for Him, we would face endless night. His love unconditional is for us all. Creator of everything both great and small, God lives in beauty each day we see. His love unconditional is for us all. Blessed are we by His divinity. God lives in beauty each day we see. If not for Him, we would face endless night. Blessed are we by His divinity. Lord I pantoum you, giver of the Light. May 19, 2018 For James Edward Lee Sr.'s 'LORD, I PANTOUM YOU' Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/21/2018 4:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this pantoum of gratitude!
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Date: 6/16/2018 9:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea.. Wonderful write and wisdom.. Hugs Eve ~' *
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Date: 6/16/2018 5:06:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Andrea.
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Date: 5/22/2018 7:38:00 AM
Andrea, so beautifully penned, dear heart ~
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Date: 5/21/2018 10:13:00 AM
Yours is the first entry I've read that was actually a pantoum. Good luck!
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Date: 5/21/2018 6:44:00 AM
Beautifully done my friend...a winner already...love and light...^WW^
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Date: 5/20/2018 5:24:00 PM
Bravo Andrea a fabulous pantoum - I adore the form but didn't write for this particular contest:-) good luck:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/20/2018 10:09:00 AM
A great challenge and well done, Andrea!
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Date: 5/20/2018 6:44:00 AM
Well done, Andrea! Love it!
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Date: 5/20/2018 6:17:00 AM
Inspirational Pantoum..nicely executed..best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 5/19/2018 11:09:00 PM
Beautiful pantoum Andrea, I wrote one once and I'll be honest, struggled a bit. Well written. Good luck. Tom.
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