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Lord, I Pantoum

LORD, I PANTOUM, you whispered "I love you. Your trepidation and dread I will take. Sin had left a crimson stain, I've washed new. You will bathe in the spiritual lake. Your trepidation and dread I will take. I am the pristine air of life you breathe. You will bathe in the spiritual lake the pebble washed by ripple stream beneath. I am the pristine air of life you breathe. The light that shines upon the earth and stars, the pebble washed by ripple stream beneath. The beacon that shines on Saturn and Mars, the light that shines upon the earth and stars. I laid down My life to rescue my flock, The beacon that shines on Saturn and Mars. So, you can drink from the spiritual rock. I laid down My life to rescue my flock Sin had left a crimson stain, I've washed new. So, you can drink from the spiritual rock LORD, I PANTOUM, you whispered "I love you. 4/24/2018 Poetry Contest: LORD, I PANTOUM YOU - Sponsored by: James Edward Lee Sr. MUST USE " LORD, I PANTOUM " IN TITLE AS WELL AS USE IT IN THE POEM ALSO

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Date: 6/21/2018 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win with this wonderful poem of praise and prayer.
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Date: 6/21/2018 8:01:00 AM
Thank you, Susan Hugs Eve
Date: 6/16/2018 5:10:00 PM
Congrats on first place!
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/16/2018 9:21:00 PM
Thank you Kim .. Hugs Eve ~' *
Date: 6/16/2018 4:59:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Eve.
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/16/2018 9:21:00 PM
Thank you Line .. Hugs Eve ~' *
Date: 5/7/2018 9:41:00 AM
A beautiful example of a pantoum, really enjoyed reading it, good luck for the contest
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/16/2018 9:21:00 PM
Thank you Faraz.. Hugs Eve ~' *
Date: 5/3/2018 1:43:00 PM
Very lovely Pantoum which is sure to be on the winners' list. I know James will love this piece! Hugs and blessings. Pandita
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/16/2018 9:21:00 PM
Thank you Pandita.. Hugs Eve ~' *
Date: 4/26/2018 3:58:00 PM
You do pantoums very well...
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/16/2018 9:22:00 PM
Thank you Silent One.. Hugs Eve ~' *
Date: 4/26/2018 7:41:00 AM
Sure to be on the winners list. Eve.
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/16/2018 9:22:00 PM
Thank you Elaine .. Hugs Eve ~' *
Date: 4/26/2018 4:49:00 AM
A beautiful morning prayer, Eve, best of luck. John
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/16/2018 9:23:00 PM
Thank you John.. Hugs Eve ~' *
Date: 4/25/2018 5:06:00 PM
Baptism removes the stain and the path to eternal life lays before us. A deeply spiritual write that reminds us God is everywhere! Best wishes in the contest, Eve. Hugs, Carolyn
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/25/2018 7:56:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn...Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 4/25/2018 4:42:00 PM
a glorious hymn of praise, eve... wonderful work!...huggs
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/25/2018 7:55:00 PM
Thank you,Nette... Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 4/25/2018 6:28:00 AM
Uplifting thoughts, spiritual verses... this reads like a prayer, dedicated to worship..great write..best for a win, Eve.
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/25/2018 11:51:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay... Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 4/24/2018 6:37:00 PM
Your pantoum is beautiful, Eve. Exquisitely done. Bravo.
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/25/2018 11:50:00 AM
Thank you, Line, I do need the inspiration :) Hugs Eve ~`*

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