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Lord, Save Me

Lord save me. I need Thy mercy and grace sprinkled from the hands ~~of my One True Savior~~ She took her life and now I seek deep insight for her shattered life that she so easily dismissed. Lord, please sew my detached thread and heal me. Etheree - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman Total # of syllables: 55 syllables Total # of words: 46 Syllables checked at howmanysyllables.com Date Written: July 23, 2016

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Date: 7/27/2016 7:57:00 PM
This is very sad.....and beautiful, Congratulations
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Date: 7/27/2016 6:50:00 PM
Laura, congrats on your placement in my contest! A well written etheree filled with emotion. A beautiful write. Thank you for supporting my contest! Blessings!
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Date: 7/27/2016 8:40:00 AM
A very touching poem LuLoo congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/27/2016 1:13:00 AM
A beautiful moving piece luloo! Congratulations on your deserving win. I loved this entry! 7 ; )
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Date: 7/27/2016 12:22:00 AM
Laura, beautiful and powerful. Who else can we turn to when the bottom falls out? Congrats on the well-deserved win. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 7/27/2016 12:05:00 AM
This is touching...and remind me someone who decided to change her fate like this...God bless her soul. Congrats on your win. Sunita.
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Date: 7/26/2016 11:58:00 PM
Amen to that, and congratulations, Laura, Viv x
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Date: 7/26/2016 10:36:00 PM
Touching and deep, Luloo. Congratulations on your placement in this Etheree Premiere Contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/26/2016 8:48:00 PM
Touching etheree, so sorry for your loss. Life is so fragile for some.
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Date: 7/23/2016 1:21:00 PM
Deep words, we do all seek the Lord's grace in such a way. Best of luck for the contest :)
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Date: 7/23/2016 1:31:00 PM
thank you Anoucheka... :)-luloo

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