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Hey Good Lookin'

There once was a lady from VanYoddel Dreamt of extending mirrors to dawdle Clung so long to that wish Made her feel feverish Splurged for the wrinkle remover model Submitted on August 9, 2021 for contest A BRIAN STRAND RHYME POETRY contest sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on April 26, 2018

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Kim Merryman

Date: 8/11/2021 6:15:00 PM

Cute limerick, Line! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/12/2021 5:12:00 AM

Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated ~

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/27/2018 1:30:00 PM

I'll have to look up 'VanYoddel' - it sure is fun to say! Very clever limerick Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2018 2:49:00 PM

Good luck looking for VanYoddel on this planet... let me know if you find it. LOL

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/27/2018 10:17:00 AM

Sweet limerick. When she finds the wrinkle remover mirror, I will not buy it. I have earned every one of my wrinkles.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2018 2:50:00 PM

Good for you, Caren. There are lots of vain people in this wonderful world. LOL

Caycay Jennings

Date: 4/27/2018 4:13:00 AM

So, you've got Limerick talent! They do not come easily to me. Your content and choice of rhyme scheme made this extra special to me. I leave this page with a limerick grin, Line. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2018 6:49:00 AM

Delightful. LOL Thanks CayCay for your lovely visit and comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2018 12:52:00 AM

oh that is cute. I'm sure looking for one of those models.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2018 6:49:00 AM

There's a long line up, Andrea. LOL

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2018 12:51:00 AM

hey there, Line. I am so sorry to not be seeing poems of yours much. I have not had time for Soup these past few days, but I love limericks so let me see these two latest of yours

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2018 6:51:00 AM

Hi Andrea, There are so many worthy poems on Soup. Too bad we never see them all.