Hey Good Lookin'

There once was a lady from VanYoddel
Dreamt of extending mirrors to dawdle 
       Clung so long to that wish
       Made her feel feverish
Splurged for the wrinkle remover model



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on August 9, 2021 for contest A BRIAN STRAND RHYME POETRY contest sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Merryman Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 6:15 PM
Cute limerick, Line! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Gauthier Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 5:12 AM
Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated ~
Faulkner Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 1:30 PM
I'll have to look up 'VanYoddel' - it sure is fun to say! Very clever limerick Line!
Gauthier Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Good luck looking for VanYoddel on this planet... let me know if you find it. LOL
Krutsinger Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 10:17 AM
Sweet limerick. When she finds the wrinkle remover mirror, I will not buy it. I have earned every one of my wrinkles.
Gauthier Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 2:50 PM
Good for you, Caren. There are lots of vain people in this wonderful world. LOL
Godwin Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 4:13 AM
So, you've got Limerick talent! They do not come easily to me. Your content and choice of rhyme scheme made this extra special to me. I leave this page with a limerick grin, Line. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Gauthier Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 6:49 AM
Delightful. LOL Thanks CayCay for your lovely visit and comment.
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 12:52 AM
oh that is cute. I'm sure looking for one of those models.
Gauthier Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 6:49 AM
There's a long line up, Andrea. LOL
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 12:51 AM
hey there, Line. I am so sorry to not be seeing poems of yours much. I have not had time for Soup these past few days, but I love limericks so let me see these two latest of yours
Gauthier Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 6:51 AM
Hi Andrea, There are so many worthy poems on Soup. Too bad we never see them all.
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