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Looking For the Sunshine Contest

I counted up to 50 with eyes closed very tight. Was my turn to be ”on” my turn to find the light I looked under the garden hedge Nothing interesting was there. Except a sleepy hedgehog Who looked at me and stared I looked in the garden pond watched the bugs scramble about The water skaters strutting their stuff Where is it hiding I can’t find out … I spotted a yellow balloon Thought wow I have found it now. But it popped when near a rose, Knew it wasn’t that somehow. What am I looking for? You might ask, it’s warm and fine The answers very clear find me the sunshine To warm the flowers in their beds, So nodding colours will awake To brighten up our lives and dance to the hippy hippy shake At last I got out my easel large paintbrush at the ready Painted in a sun at full shine Here it comes, ready, steady The colour lightens up the sky Making one feel warm inside. Start to sing, to waken the birds Welcoming the incoming tide I look at the sea looking so azure Nature to enjoy for free . Doesn’t matter if rich or poor It is there, for you and me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/7/2013 2:35:00 PM
Delightful poem Seren. It flowed very well. I like the part, "you painted the sun at full shine". It put a smile on my face. Thanks for sharing your poem. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/6/2013 12:29:00 PM
hi ya girl check out my latest poem just for you,btw love this one xx
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Date: 3/6/2013 12:25:00 PM
Seren congrats on your featured poem...excellent...David
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Date: 3/6/2013 10:14:00 AM
love this upbeat write, Seren - always love your paintings too
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Date: 3/6/2013 8:20:00 AM
and i look at your poetry, and think wow what a girl, what a poem, what creation, then i go behind all of that and i see someone lovely
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Date: 3/4/2013 5:38:00 PM
This brightened up my evening here where it is cold and cloudy...thanks....
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/4/2013 7:20:00 PM
My pleasure Donna, glad it brought a smile....Seren
Date: 3/4/2013 1:21:00 PM
Seren great picture here, though you are far too young for the hippy hippy shake lol...David
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/4/2013 3:05:00 PM
still know the music David, whats age got to do with it lol....Seren
Date: 3/4/2013 10:02:00 AM
This is such a wondrous and delightful write! I am enthralled by the wonderment of this incredible poem my friend! What an enlightening piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/4/2013 7:21:00 PM
Thank you Russell ... Seren

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