Looking For Spring

We too have waited for the spring,
with great anticipation.
Looking for each growing thing
with eager expectation,
and without trepidation.

Our normal spring so filled with glory,
With fields of luscious green,
an outdoor conservatory 
in no other season seen.
Rains have washed it bright and clean.

I love the days of springtime
when butterflies take wing,
The vines with early  flowers climb
and songbirds stop to sing.
But all is changed this spring.

In our adjacent county
a mile and half wide slide
took homes and lives as bounty.
So many good folks died.
And many more have cried.

It was early in the morning,
two hundred folks in bed,
the slide came without a warning.
They're buried and they're dead.
The mountain has been fed.

Written 3/25/ 14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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June 8, 2014 at 7:42 AM
Beautiful WIn Joyce, xox~ SKAT
Kendrick Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 4:58 PM
Great work reminding us about the sad tradegy..It was a unique and timely topic about which to write a winning work..Congrats.Sara
Onclaud Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 1:50 PM
polarity at its best, joyce.. congrats on your fine win and huggs
Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 1:15 PM
THAt was a very good way to write about that tragic event, because it contrasts so starkly with the beauty of the season all around it. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Johnson Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 1:21 PM
They are slowly coming back. They just found the last two bodies this week. They have built a road enough to get between the two towns of Arlington and Darrington withoutt having to take a long detour. The human spirit is indomitable. Joyce
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 4:02 AM
Joy and sorrow written with the unique style you always share Joyce. I am honored to share #4 with such a great poet as yourself. Congratulations!
Mehta Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 1:58 AM
Lovely poem on the Spring. Congrats on the win, Joyce
Roberts Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 11:51 PM
congrats on your win Joyce, a sadder take on my contest
Guzzi Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 7:32 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Gibson Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 4:55 PM
Joyce, quite a story you have told very poetically. Congratulations on your placement.
Devonshire Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 4:08 PM
Dear Joyce, I remember this poem so well. What happened in your state spread sadness throughout the rest of the country. A very deserved win, dear. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Horne Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 3:13 PM
oh, powerful and thought provoking - love it
Peranteau Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 8:16 PM
Dear poet, many souls of late, have met their match. My prayers are strong with salt. A touching write Joyce ! Have a blessed weekend my dear soft poet....much love, james
Devonshire Avatar
March 28, 2014 at 1:50 PM
Dear Joyce, I am so glad you are not among those who succumbed to the avalanche. The first few verses painted a lovely image of spring, but the ending made me weep for all who were lost. Bless you for sharing this touching poem. Love you! Carolyn
Smith Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 3:34 PM
Spring can be so beautiful but just as easily be deadly. I remember all the floods a couple years back in the northeast that took the lives of many. Excellent write Joyce...Hugs Tim
Gorelick Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 2:04 PM
What a horror this event...A great poem ..BG
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 12:14 AM
wow, what a powerful poem, Joyce . Starts out so sweet and then gets so dark. I love this kind of poem!!
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