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I found this cute picture when looking for an image for my 'Float on' limerick - so I had to write a poem

I'm thirsty - I needed a drink There lurking in my kitchen sink Lying flat on his back He’s no longer jet black A hedgehog…now he doesn't stink! 11th April 2015

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Date: 11/24/2015 1:12:00 AM
nice Jan... SKAT
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Date: 4/27/2015 4:54:00 PM
Very interesting poem
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Date: 4/27/2015 4:56:00 PM
Thanks so much Afolabi:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/25/2015 7:48:00 PM
cute picture and poem
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Date: 4/25/2015 7:49:00 PM
Thanks so much Shirley:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/14/2015 7:03:00 AM
hahahah the picture is just cute so is your poem.. :D! hugs Jan.. yey!!~olive eloisa
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Date: 4/14/2015 11:20:00 AM
Thanks Olive when I found the image I simply had to write about it:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/13/2015 10:16:00 AM
HOW CUTE!!! I MEANT BOTH THE POEM AND THE PHOTO!! :D
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Date: 4/13/2015 10:37:00 AM
I will thanks Sneha:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/13/2015 10:21:00 AM
Yes, look at 'cute animal pictures' in Google!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/13/2015 10:18:00 AM
I found the pic when looking for images for my 'float on poem' I had to copy itand write a poem - I thought it was so so cute:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/12/2015 3:03:00 PM
Aww what a cutie, still if I was you I hedge my bets and use antibacterial soap. Not that I'm trying to hog the spotlight. Great picture, great Lime Rickey a 10 and a fav!
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Date: 4/12/2015 3:18:00 PM
Ohh Armand you are the only one to make me feel special with the ten rating - so many other's haven't worked out how to do it yet! hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/11/2015 11:45:00 PM
How adorable looking!! Did he used to be a skunk? your meter is improving so nicely, jan.
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Date: 4/12/2015 3:46:00 AM
Thanks Andrea - I do try to improve my writing but admit I do struggle at times but people here are so wonderful at passing on their advice:-) I found this pic when I was doing the 'float on poem' and copied the image so i could write about this cute little chap:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/11/2015 4:04:00 PM
They are such lovely creatures, sadly they suffer from fleas sometimes :) But I simply adore them so much, hugs Jan, James xx
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Date: 4/11/2015 4:26:00 PM
there was one in the road the other day I had to walk past it with my eyes closed upset me so much - rarely see them alive :-( Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/11/2015 2:49:00 PM
cute
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Date: 4/11/2015 2:55:00 PM
cheers Cas:-) Stop hiding behind the camera - you are too beautiful to hide your lovely face! Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/11/2015 12:34:00 PM
I don't know what is cutest, the hedgehog or your poem. Both are quite adorable.
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Date: 4/11/2015 12:36:00 PM
Thank you so much Brenda I did write another limerick before this one and when I was looking for an image I found this so I had to write. SO SO lovely to see you back:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/11/2015 10:04:00 AM
Jan, this is so sweet and delightful, well done, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, When I met him
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Date: 4/11/2015 10:22:00 AM
Thanks so much Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/11/2015 9:08:00 AM
Cute hedge of a hog, Jan! So is the lim of a pen! Kim :)
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Date: 4/11/2015 9:12:00 AM
aww thanks Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/11/2015 8:36:00 AM
I'm so glad that you didn't mean, a pipe off a washing machine :( Viv x
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Date: 4/11/2015 8:38:00 AM
Better than what he found in the loo in float on lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/11/2015 7:53:00 AM
Cute poem, cute hedgehog :)
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Date: 4/11/2015 7:55:00 AM
Guess the theme is much better than my 'float on' limerick Ed lol:-) Hugs Jan xx