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Look What I Found In the Sink

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I found this cute picture when looking for an image for my 'Float on' limerick - so I had to write a poem

I'm thirsty - I needed a drink There lurking in my kitchen sink Lying flat on his back He’s no longer jet black A hedgehog…now he doesn't stink! 11th April 2015

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Skat A

Date: 11/24/2015 1:12:00 AM

nice Jan... SKAT

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 4/27/2015 4:54:00 PM

Very interesting poem

Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2015 4:56:00 PM

Thanks so much Afolabi:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shirley Rebstock

Date: 4/25/2015 7:48:00 PM

cute picture and poem

Jan Allison
Date: 4/25/2015 7:49:00 PM

Thanks so much Shirley:-) Hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/14/2015 7:03:00 AM

hahahah the picture is just cute so is your poem.. :D! hugs Jan.. yey!!~olive eloisa

Jan Allison
Date: 4/14/2015 11:20:00 AM

Thanks Olive when I found the image I simply had to write about it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv

Date: 4/13/2015 10:16:00 AM

HOW CUTE!!! I MEANT BOTH THE POEM AND THE PHOTO!! :D

Jan Allison
Date: 4/13/2015 10:37:00 AM

I will thanks Sneha:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/13/2015 10:21:00 AM

Yes, look at 'cute animal pictures' in Google!!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/13/2015 10:18:00 AM

I found the pic when looking for images for my 'float on poem' I had to copy itand write a poem - I thought it was so so cute:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/12/2015 3:03:00 PM

Aww what a cutie, still if I was you I hedge my bets and use antibacterial soap. Not that I'm trying to hog the spotlight. Great picture, great Lime Rickey a 10 and a fav!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2015 3:18:00 PM

Ohh Armand you are the only one to make me feel special with the ten rating - so many other's haven't worked out how to do it yet! hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2015 11:45:00 PM

How adorable looking!! Did he used to be a skunk? your meter is improving so nicely, jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2015 3:46:00 AM

Thanks Andrea - I do try to improve my writing but admit I do struggle at times but people here are so wonderful at passing on their advice:-) I found this pic when I was doing the 'float on poem' and copied the image so i could write about this cute little chap:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 4/11/2015 4:04:00 PM

They are such lovely creatures, sadly they suffer from fleas sometimes :) But I simply adore them so much, hugs Jan, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/11/2015 4:26:00 PM

there was one in the road the other day I had to walk past it with my eyes closed upset me so much - rarely see them alive :-( Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/11/2015 2:49:00 PM

cute

Jan Allison
Date: 4/11/2015 2:55:00 PM

cheers Cas:-) Stop hiding behind the camera - you are too beautiful to hide your lovely face! Hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 4/11/2015 12:34:00 PM

I don't know what is cutest, the hedgehog or your poem. Both are quite adorable.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/11/2015 12:36:00 PM

Thank you so much Brenda I did write another limerick before this one and when I was looking for an image I found this so I had to write. SO SO lovely to see you back:-) Hugs Jan xx