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rocking on the porch always yelling at the kids alone and afraid
For the Misjudged contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/28/2015 2:18:00 PM
So true !!! Unhappiness, creates isolation and anger. So sad !!
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Date: 8/4/2015 10:32:00 PM
what kids often do they are being a big pest forget all the rest
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Date: 7/27/2015 11:25:00 PM
A cracker of a Senryu, Barbara. Viv x
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Date: 7/23/2015 5:01:00 AM
so much said here Barbara, yes ever so visual, just love this poem..
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Date: 7/20/2015 11:23:00 AM
oh this is a sad scene Barbara - good luck in the contest:-) hugs janxx
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