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Look At What I found - Nursery Rhyme

Look at what I found, here on the ground. It is soft and white, I want to hold it tight. It is from a pretty bird, red is what I preferred. Where can the little white bird be, guess it needed to flee.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/5/2024 10:15:00 AM

"1 Place" Look At What I found - Nursery Rhyme ~Date Written:8/19/2024 ~~ Picture #3

Karen Jones

Date: 8/29/2024 7:02:00 AM

Back to say congratulations on your perfect poem winning first place!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/29/2024 1:26:00 PM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my Nursery Rhyme. Thank You for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed this write again. Great to see you back. It was fun to write. Have a fun day writing away....................

Terry Miller

Date: 8/28/2024 6:26:00 AM

Very charming, congratulations

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/28/2024 9:58:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my Nursery Rhyme. Thank You for your congratulations. Glad you found this write to be Very charming. I had was so much fun writing this one. Have a fun day writing away....................

thriveni c mysore

Date: 8/28/2024 1:58:00 AM

so cute. congratulations dear poet. cheers.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/28/2024 9:57:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my Nursery Rhyme. Thank You for your congratulations. Glad you found this write to be so cute. It was so much fun to write. Have a fun day writing away....................

Beata Agustin

Date: 8/28/2024 1:41:00 AM

Wow! Congrats... Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end... God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/28/2024 9:55:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my Nursery Rhyme. Thank You for your congratulations. Glad you found this write to be delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end. It was fun to write. Have a fun day writing away....................

Karen Jones

Date: 8/24/2024 2:56:00 PM

This is perfect and I enjoyed reading!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/28/2024 9:32:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my Nursery Rhyme. Glad you found this write to be perfect and you enjoyed reading. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Have a fun day writing away....................

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/22/2024 4:22:00 AM

a most charming, engaging piece wc would delight both children and adults,paula... you must really like birds!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2024 11:09:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my Nursery Rhyme. Glad you enjoyed this fun write. It is for a picture. A white bird is looking out the window as the little girl finds a white feather on the ground. I had a bird as a pet as a child. I fed red wild birds outside before I moved. No birds here. Have a fun day writing away....................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/20/2024 11:31:00 AM

I didn’t understand until I read Valsa’s reaponse. Cool!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2024 9:15:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my Nursery Rhyme. Glad you enjoyed this fun write. It is for a picture. A white bird is looking out the window as the little girl finds a white feather on the ground. She assumes that it must be from a white bird. Have a fun day writing away....................

Valsa George

Date: 8/20/2024 9:20:00 AM

Cute little nursery rhyme. A child gets fascinated by the white feather she saw on the ground and assumes that it must be from a white bird. You are ready to write on any theme. Enjoyed reading it. Have a great week ahead, dear Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2024 9:12:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my Nursery Rhyme. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun write. She looks fascinated by the white feather she saw on the ground. It is fun to watch small kids. Have a fun day writing away....................

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/19/2024 11:16:00 PM

Charming, simple and great fun.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2024 9:09:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my Nursery Rhyme. Glad you enjoyed this fun write. She is cute/charming in the picture. Have a fun day writing away....................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/19/2024 7:57:00 PM

Either that or to pea... lol. Cute write, Paula! :) gw

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2024 9:08:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my Nursery Rhyme. Glad you enjoyed this fun write. She is cute in the picture. Have a fun day writing away....................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/19/2024 5:43:00 PM

Lovely sweet poetry in nursery rhyme Paula, written with your unique charm, as always… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2024 9:06:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my Nursery Rhyme. Glad you found this write to be a Lovely sweet poetry in nursery rhyme. I enjoyed writing this one... Have a fun day writing away....................

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/19/2024 1:57:00 PM

you always have something magical in your bag of poetry ... this one is totally charming, paula!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2024 9:04:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my Nursery Rhyme. Glad you found this write to be totally charming. It was fun to bring to life.... Have a fun day writing away....................

Silent One

Date: 8/19/2024 1:38:00 PM

This one made me smile.. Nice little nursery rhyme..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2024 9:02:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my Nursery Rhyme. Glad you enjoyed this fun write & it made you smile. "Smile" Have a fun day writing away....................

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/19/2024 1:14:00 PM

This has questions. What is the bird doing, is the feather from a molt or from an attack? I see this picture in my mind.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2024 9:00:00 AM

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2024 1:10:00 PM

What a cute little nursery rhyme, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2024 8:56:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over to read/write on my Nursery Rhyme. Glad you found this write to be a cute little nursery rhyme. Have a fun day writing away....................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/19/2024 9:11:00 AM

Look At What I found - Nursery Rhyme ~Date Written:8/19/2024 ~~ Picture #3