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Look At This place

Look at this place I did a sink full of dishes,
now the sink is magically full again.
Look at this place I washed three loads of clothes,
so why is the hamper full.
Look at this place yesterday I dusted and polished,
now I can write my name in the dust.
Look at this place I picked up until my back hurt,
it looks like a hurricane just came though.
Look at this place and I do,
work here is never done
Look at this place,
so what is a girl supposed to do.
Date Written: 3/30/2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 3/31/2021 6:32:00 PM
Oh yes! I feel your pain, Paula.. 'A woman's work is never done' is so true! A wonderful poem, my friend. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/1/2021 11:45:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your best wishes. So glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day and Easter..................
Date: 3/31/2021 8:13:00 AM
sounds so familiar ~ lol
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/31/2021 9:26:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this "look at this place" write. What do they say about man working days and we work 24/7???? Have a blessed day and Easter..................
Date: 3/31/2021 5:54:00 AM
This can be so true Paula. Great one :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/31/2021 9:23:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day and Easter..................
Date: 3/30/2021 4:17:00 PM
Oh I can relate! It seems like the house never gets clean because I have to redo everything (especially the part about the sink full of dirty dishes!) A very clever idea for the contest, best of luck~
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/31/2021 9:22:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your best of luck. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day and Easter..................