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Long River Running

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ love between us is speech and breath loving you is long river running

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Bill Baker

Date: 2/14/2024 5:44:00 PM

Your river of Love keeps flowing into my heart, I keep the Love flowing, doing my part. Happy Valentines Day, my valentine forever. :-) Thanks for the sweet gifts this morning, you're the best. Your chocolates are on their way. That had to find another truck, the first one broke down from too heavy of a load. :-) Big Bear Hugs, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/15/2024 3:51:00 AM

I'm grateful for you and your enduring love...can't believe the chocolate truck broke down...you made me smile...thanks for being my hero bear, hugs, me

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/14/2024 10:09:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/picture. Happy Valentine’s Day..........................

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/14/2024 4:41:00 PM

thank you, Paula...I wrote it for my hubby and gave it to him this morning. He taped it to his desk. Have a great evening. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/14/2024 9:57:00 AM

Great metaphors plus emotions. I also wonder if you disliked my pantoum.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/14/2024 4:42:00 PM

thanks Victor for your visit and positive comments. I read your Pantoum late this afternoon and left some comments. Yes, I liked it...thought it was both poignant and sad. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/14/2024 9:48:00 AM

Dear Sara, your words are a testament to your powerful and eloquent writing abilities. They effectively and beautifully convey heartfelt emotions that resonate with both the author and the reader.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/14/2024 4:47:00 PM

thanks, kind Sotto, for dropping by. I appreciate your positive words...wrote this poem for Bill and surprised him with it today. I think he liked it...he taped it to his desk :-) have a great evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/14/2024 9:11:00 AM

Ahhh!!! Just keep that river flowing. Very romantic for Valentines. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/14/2024 4:46:00 PM

thanks, Sara K, for your kind and positive words. Gotta keep the river flowing :-) Have a great evening, Sara B

Mark Hughes

Date: 2/14/2024 8:17:00 AM

But of course, Terrific!!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/14/2024 4:44:00 PM

thanks, Mark! Appreciate your enthusiasm!

Lin Lane

Date: 2/14/2024 6:34:00 AM

I think your gently flowing river describes what I know of the love you share with Bill. Constant and smooth... oh a little ripple once in a while keeps the water flowing. lol

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/14/2024 4:45:00 PM

you're most kind, Lin. You're right, our love is constant and smooth (most of the time). Every relationship has challenges, but we're committed to the 'river.' Have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara