Long Ago

Long ago and far away
I had a love I thought was true
But he did not beside me stay.
His love waned, while mine grew.

Another time, another place
But right here in my memory.
I reach to touch his dear face
Then like a dream, it's gone from me.

It seems as in another life.
So much time has now passed.
Loneliness cuts like a knife
Since the time I held him last.

I was alive for that brief time
When I was his and he was mine.





written june 11/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Taylor Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 7:05 PM
Congrats on 1st Place, Francine. Nice going. luv Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 2:50 PM
Congrats Francine on your first place win in the contest..with another delightful write from your creative pen my friend..luv..
Johnson Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 10:02 PM
Congratulations Francine. This is a great write. Love, Joyce
Taylor Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 10:24 AM
Congrats on your win, Francine. Nice going. xxxRalph
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 9:55 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian Strand's contest "Aspects Of Love" contest Francine. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 11:14 AM
such a sad write I think many of us have been here sometimes I don't ever want to love like that again...other times I miss it! [Can you please comment on my blog francie? I don't know why no one seems interested? pout...] Light & Love
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June 15, 2011 at 3:11 PM
Heartfelt and genuinely moving, Francine. You know I can relate to this feeling. Hope we both find a way to feel "alive" again soon. I think all of our "golden girls" have had this experience. Don't know how I missed this earlier. MRI is tomorrow, results probably Monday. I'll keep you posted. Much love, Carolyn
Zzzzz Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 3:40 AM
A poetic, bitter-sweet Sonnet. I'm sure many can relate to this. Regards, Robert.
Onclaud Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 10:10 PM
oh francine, sorry about name and date.. did look at your rules but may have missed these parts as these are new directions from you.. :) huggs, nette
Johnson Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 10:03 PM
Very very deep n good, the Queen of verse, is understood... give me shivers there babe? xo, Don
Onclaud Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 9:20 AM
sonnet!! grace--filled, francine dear.. posted my piece fpr ypu. please confirm..;) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 9:17 PM
such lovely sentiments in this Sonnet Francine.. full of emotions and lingering thoughts of time gone by .. excellent ..hope all who entered your contest match this great write luv..
Mehta Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 1:18 PM
very poignant and touchy write on the lost love, Francine
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