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Long Ago

Long ago and far away I had a love I thought was true But he did not beside me stay. His love waned, while mine grew. Another time, another place But right here in my memory. I reach to touch his dear face Then like a dream, it's gone from me. It seems as in another life. So much time has now passed. Loneliness cuts like a knife Since the time I held him last. I was alive for that brief time When I was his and he was mine. written june 11/2011

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Date: 7/25/2011 7:05:00 PM
Congrats on 1st Place, Francine. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 7/25/2011 2:50:00 PM
Congrats Francine on your first place win in the contest..with another delightful write from your creative pen my friend..luv..
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Date: 7/23/2011 10:02:00 PM
Congratulations Francine. This is a great write. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/22/2011 10:24:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Francine. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 7/22/2011 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian Strand's contest "Aspects Of Love" contest Francine. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2011 11:14:00 AM
such a sad write I think many of us have been here sometimes I don't ever want to love like that again...other times I miss it! [Can you please comment on my blog francie? I don't know why no one seems interested? pout...] Light & Love
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Date: 6/15/2011 3:11:00 PM
Heartfelt and genuinely moving, Francine. You know I can relate to this feeling. Hope we both find a way to feel "alive" again soon. I think all of our "golden girls" have had this experience. Don't know how I missed this earlier. MRI is tomorrow, results probably Monday. I'll keep you posted. Much love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/13/2011 3:40:00 AM
A poetic, bitter-sweet Sonnet. I'm sure many can relate to this. Regards, Robert.
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Date: 6/12/2011 10:10:00 PM
oh francine, sorry about name and date.. did look at your rules but may have missed these parts as these are new directions from you.. :) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/12/2011 10:03:00 PM
Very very deep n good, the Queen of verse, is understood... give me shivers there babe? xo, Don
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Date: 6/12/2011 9:20:00 AM
sonnet!! grace--filled, francine dear.. posted my piece fpr ypu. please confirm..;) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/11/2011 9:17:00 PM
such lovely sentiments in this Sonnet Francine.. full of emotions and lingering thoughts of time gone by .. excellent ..hope all who entered your contest match this great write luv..
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Date: 6/11/2011 1:18:00 PM
very poignant and touchy write on the lost love, Francine
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