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Lonely Tear-Revised

As the lonely black tear ran down her face her broken heart hurt so bad it bled out The intense pain of grief sprang out from the depths of a lonely and tormented soul Contest: Double Tetractys 5 Sponsor: Eve Roper 11/08/2020

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/15/2020 6:30:00 AM

Nice one Alexis. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Eve Roper

Date: 11/14/2020 6:52:00 PM

Well written with great flow and imagery, Alexis, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/14/2020 4:46:00 PM

Dear Alexis, it is a pleasure to return and offer you my congratulations for your excellent win in Eve's contest. I'm so glad this sad beauty got the recognition it, and you, deserve. Warmest wishes, my dear friend.. ~Susan

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 11/14/2020 3:13:00 PM

Congratulations, Alexis, on your win!!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/14/2020 12:54:00 PM

Lines filled with emotions so close to the surface they can see seen and felt Alexis! As Susan said, this is an "intense" experience of pain and grief! Well spoken. Congratulations on your win!

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/11/2020 4:46:00 PM

Dear Alexis, your wonderful pen spills tears for ink with heart wrenching emotions. A lonely black tear is the epitome of pain and grief. Your imagery is intense and deep, dear poetess. Best wishes for a win, my friend.. ~Susan

Silent One

Date: 11/9/2020 8:59:00 AM

Deeply emotive choice for this from..

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/9/2020 7:49:00 AM

I agree w/Regina and Vijay. A delicious dark chocolate taste of ink, Alexis. Your muse has elevated transcendently! LOVE this poem, my dear friend. Smiles and smiles of joy forever.

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/9/2020 7:55:00 AM

Hi Freddie, Thank you so much. I am sooo happy to get a visit from you. I hope is well with you and that you’re staying safe.I will visit you soon my dear friend. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/9/2020 5:53:00 AM

WOW! Great emotive poem --so well written, Alexis!!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/9/2020 3:21:00 AM

I simply love this... such a honest and heartfelt piece of poetry... a true teardrop of inspiration in your message. Love it. God bless you