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Lonely Is This Night

The wailing of a lonely night as heavy eyes carry much weight; rail of drops blotting moonlit white without hope to reel or translate a nail piercing her hollow sky--- The only thing she needs to ask is an ending of pain’s goodbye, while ripples of vision unmask those wilted days robbing time’s grace. Cold marble lips that have not kissed the moist of springtime’s warm embrace, from pleading of angst quite dismissed. Any Poem Written in July 2016 Sponsor: Laura Loo Posted7/23/2016/ Resubmitted 8/17/2016

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Date: 8/17/2016 1:53:00 PM
Nette, you always carry such the perfect flow and rhyme..this is lovely and touching...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 7/27/2016 2:59:00 AM
nicely done... congratulations ..
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Date: 7/25/2016 10:39:00 PM
Words that can be felt, heavy and sad, beautiful write!
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Date: 7/23/2016 11:56:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on the placement of the contest
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Date: 7/23/2016 8:32:00 PM
Nette, a lovely write for the contest and I am loving it 7 ~
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Date: 7/23/2016 2:31:00 PM
Nette, so beautiful! you always carry such a wonderful flow especially in your rhyming poems...good luck it will do well in the contest lady :)-luloo
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Date: 7/23/2016 5:07:00 AM
In a loneliness like this certainly I wouldn't complain to be lost dear, nette! A seven!
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Date: 7/23/2016 1:49:00 AM
Hello dear poet! So here is my poetic 2cents my dear nette...you emphatically are the literary artist finding the opportune to capture the lonely many find not so delightful; yet yours truly knows as well as yourself that without some lonely....well, romantic poesy would be the bore...*sm...I thank the poets who fill in those loneliest for one as I who find difficulty engraving such 'pon slip! Fantastic write nette...much love, james
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Date: 7/22/2016 7:52:00 PM
You took this quatrain without having to separate the 4-line stanzas, which is outstanding.Wrenching and astounding poetry that will earn top charts!
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Date: 7/22/2016 5:43:00 PM
either you are a very good writer or you're a very good writer that paints the empty truth of loneliness from experience..good luck
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