Lonely

LONELY I cannot ignore loneliness of mind overcoming dull depression, dismay. Devastated dreams repeat to rewind. I suffer failing those to drive away. I search to sink, to link with deep dense roots of my passion, yearning or emotion that pricks, pierces, cuts, injures and puts me in solitary isolation. Reasonable or irrational thought craves, tingles to be honored by other , occupies only lonely heart I got. I proceed all along as a loner. I wish to relish my desired moments in joy but lonely mind only laments. 03/13/23

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Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2023 3:19:00 PM

Anisha, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !

Anisha Dutta
Date: 4/3/2023 10:45:00 PM

Thanks and Love

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 3/17/2023 10:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win , ANISHA ... Nice poem

Anisha Dutta
Date: 4/3/2023 10:45:00 PM

Thanks and Blessings

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/17/2023 7:46:00 AM

Rather sad but beautifully executed Anisha. Congratulations on your win! :)

Anisha Dutta
Date: 4/3/2023 10:46:00 PM

Thanks and Blessings

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/15/2023 7:07:00 AM

A sad sonnet well composed, Anisha:)

Anisha Dutta
Date: 4/3/2023 10:46:00 PM

Thanks and Blessings

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/14/2023 7:50:00 AM

Lovely, yet sad, Anitha. Loneliness has its pros and cons. Enjoyed reading your sonnet.

Anisha Dutta
Date: 4/3/2023 10:46:00 PM

Thanks and Blessings

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/14/2023 7:10:00 AM

Very sad but a great sonnet, Anisha. Loneliness does have its perks. Peace and quiet is a big plus, freedom todo what and when you want plus lots more. Like you my loneliness comes and goes. I really loved your sonnet.

Anisha Dutta
Date: 4/3/2023 10:47:00 PM

Thanks and Blessings