Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- Lonely -

~ The voice of loneliness - is barely audible ~ Quote by poet

          Terribly curved
          loneliness embraced her
          The clouds hovered darkly over the valley
          Grief, pain and tear drops got mixed
          and circulate through each vein
          in her trembling body
          as lightning from angry clouds
          She had never felt more alone
          as pushed down into a bottomless pit
          Thoughts was constantly changing
          her grief in the loneliness could not fade

          Finally in the newborn rhythm of spring
          and the color splendor of silence
          two people meet
          Sweet music arose
          one romantic ballad
          The sunlight enveloped the earth they walked on
          as under foreign skies
          Her messenger
          and most marvelous deed, 
          had angel wings
          Wisdom unites the lost and the sad
          Together they felt the harmony of life
          in contingent release




          13.03.2023
          Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
          Copyright © All Rights Reserved

          - 'L' Words - Poetry Contest
          Sponsored by: Constance La France
          1st place in the contest

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Constance La France April 3, 2023 at 2:56 PM Sunshine, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! I love the image !

Sam Kauffman March 21, 2023 at 10:42 AM Congratulations on your win Anne-Lise! Your have brought us from abject darkness into sparkling light! So effectively done with dark images that meld into pictures of lightness on "angel wings!" Wonderfully crafted! Blessings and hugs!

Tania Kitchin March 20, 2023 at 5:00 PM Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win with your well penned emotive poem, sad and beautiful!

Reason A. Poteet March 17, 2023 at 10:53 AM Lonely vs. Lovely. You feature both - well-done, Sunshine. Definitely first place material, so romantic, so real. Thanks for sharing your heart.

Ann Peck March 17, 2023 at 10:16 AM Your poem is beautiful, Sunshine. Sad, with an uplifting ending. I love your quote! A perfect depiction of loneliness. Congratulations on First Place!

Malabika Ray Choudhury March 17, 2023 at 9:03 AM Congratulations, Dear Poet, on your win with this stunning poem - the despair, the sadness - and finally the release of hope and harmony! Love ~ Mala

Christuraj Alex March 17, 2023 at 7:17 AM A great picture of loneliness and release. Beautifully written. Congratulations! Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2023 at 8:47 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations on my poem, Alex :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler March 17, 2023 at 7:06 AM Sweet write Anne-Lise! Well-deserved win! Congratulations! :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2023 at 8:46 AM - Many thanks Linda, for visiting and congratulations on my poem :) - hugs

Margarita Lillico March 17, 2023 at 7:02 AM And congrats!!! Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2023 at 8:45 AM - Many thanks for congratulations on my poem, Margarita :) - hugs

Jennifer Proxenos March 16, 2023 at 12:02 PM Two souls come together with a need for love and togetherness - 'Wisdom unites the lost the sad, together they felt the harmony of life' - eloquent, such meaning and beauty in your words. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2023 at 8:44 AM - Thank you very much, dear Jenny... glad you enjoyed this poem :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel March 14, 2023 at 10:48 PM From despair to love and hope, wonderful, Sunshine:) Anne-Lise Andresen March 15, 2023 at 2:42 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Jo :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis March 14, 2023 at 8:04 AM An apotheosis of a poem, my dearest Anne-Lise. So artfully crafted. Congratulations. Hugs and blessings! Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2023 at 8:08 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment ... I really appreciate it, Demetrios :) - hugs

Heidi Sands March 14, 2023 at 6:13 AM That same part Vijay mentioned, jumped out at me too. Very nice writing :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2023 at 6:45 AM - Thank you so much, Heidi :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit March 14, 2023 at 5:47 AM Finally in the newborn rhythm of spring and the color splendor of silence-- two people meet--splendid write, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2023 at 6:45 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose March 14, 2023 at 4:06 AM She eternal beauty cannot be described only felt. and you have succeeded in making me feel the pulse of the poem, thank you Sunshine, for sharing your talent, and ray ! Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2023 at 4:49 AM - Glad it had a pulse and you felt it, Vie Rose ... many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar March 14, 2023 at 2:04 AM Brilliant poem. Best for a win. Hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2023 at 4:47 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Victor :) - hugs

Valsa George March 13, 2023 at 8:15 PM From a bleak dusk, she has emerged into the bright sunshine of the dawn.... ! Here after she is not alone, but in sweet company ! Lovely penning, Smile. Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2023 at 4:46 AM - Lonely is sad and dark, Valsa ... I gave her a friend :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs

Fin Chuuk March 13, 2023 at 6:58 PM WOW! Absolutely stunning!! I fave it :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2023 at 4:44 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment and your valuable fave... really appreciate it, Fin :) - hugs

Yann Rolland March 13, 2023 at 6:42 PM beautiful sentiments shared, so touching penning have a nice day yann Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2023 at 4:42 AM - Many thanks, yann ... new day (Tuesday) ... enjoy it :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes March 13, 2023 at 4:17 PM Absolutely beautiful and touching. I made it a favorite before I began this comment. A sparkling poem from a talented Poet. I dont think you will need luck in the contest Anne-Lise. Cheers Wen Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2023 at 4:40 AM - No "win" in advance ... but glad you like it and I really appreciate your comment and your "fave" - Many thanks, Wendy :) - hugs

Panagiota Romios March 13, 2023 at 4:13 PM Moving, as stunning moonbeams.. Pangie Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2023 at 4:38 AM - Thank you so much, Pangie :) - hugs

Margarita Lillico March 13, 2023 at 2:56 PM Interesting how dark pit loneliness got transposed into a spring rhapsody in contingent release! Well versed, indeed! Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2023 at 4:37 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Margarita ... I wanted "a little light in the tunnel" :) - hugs