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Lonely

I’m surrounded by family and friends I feel a profound loneliness. I’m trapped inside my mind, thinking of a time when I was very happy. My soulmate and best friend passed away two years ago. I am so lonely without him; he was the love of my life. Until we meet again, I will be all alone. 09/15/2021 Contest: “ L” New Or Old Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 10/13/2021 9:41:00 AM
Hi Alexis, whoa. lonely leaves me with my mouth open. it left a pain in the middle of my Gut. to grieve this way i feel like you need a big hug. i believe your healing has made you prolific. Nicely done.
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Date: 9/22/2021 11:25:00 AM
What a sad portrait of a grieving soul who has lost her mate feeling cut off by grief from even family and friends. This really illustrates "the two shall become one." Congratulations for your win. I pray you are able to slowly come back to life and love again. Blessings and prayers.
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Date: 9/22/2021 9:57:00 AM
Alexis, congratulations on your win in my L contest with your wonderful poem, splendid writing ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/18/2021 5:46:00 PM
A sad though beautifully written poem on loneliness. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 9/18/2021 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful yet sad story/write. So sorry. Have a blessed day/weekend with your win...............
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Date: 9/16/2021 6:42:00 PM
A superbly written poem, Alexis. My best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 9/16/2021 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations, Alexis! Life is full of surprises.... we can love again....
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Date: 9/16/2021 1:52:00 AM
Two years of loneliness. I have four and a bit. My doctor invited me to take some "happy" pills but I refused. Best for a win.
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