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Loneliness 'Automat' Painting By Edward Hopper

sipping cold coffee staring into emptiness counting tiny grounds Copyright © 2009 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/11/2013 3:40:00 PM
hey, this is really good. Looks like you used a painting as inspiration. I'm surprised I have not seen it before.
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Date: 5/29/2012 10:13:00 AM
I also like Hopper. Have done some large copies of his work. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 12/27/2009 9:17:00 AM
Wonderful piece to an excellent painting Caryl >> James
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Date: 10/24/2009 4:56:00 AM
Congratulations, Caryl, on placing in Brian’s Imagine contest with this very imaginative haiku. I love this write. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 10/23/2009 2:14:00 PM
This poem packs a punch! Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest to my others comment. Wishing on continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/19/2009 12:50:00 PM
I think you painted the perfect picture with your poem. This poem clearly matches the painting. Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest!
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Date: 10/19/2009 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your Win in Brians contest, Caryl, with this wonderfully written piece! Well deserved! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/18/2009 4:12:00 PM
This says so much in a few words. Congrats on your win ...! BG
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Date: 10/18/2009 8:59:00 AM
I love this unique twist to the contest! Well done! Congratulations on your win! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/18/2009 6:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2009 5:25:00 AM
Caryl, I wish you the best in Brian's Imagine contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/14/2009 11:53:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Caryl.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/14/2009 4:32:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration. Gives the reader something to think about. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen
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