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1  LONELINESS

(Message of hope dedicated to all those that have been through such an excruciating experience.)


Loneliness:
Painful
Agonizing
Merciless 
Unbearable solitude,
When you are present, Time immobile remains,
And
Each second an eternity of intolerable 
Suffering becomes. 

At such moments,
We implore Time to advance,
To accelerate its pace,
To hurry up

For

The next second 
The next minute 
The next hour
The next day to come, 

So as 

The pain to decrease,
Our agony to lessen,
And us to be liberated from distress
From our affliction and from 
Our ordeal
But Time – a sadist- unmoved stays, 
Mocking us
 
And 

Instead of picking up speed, it is 
Dragging its leaden feet, enjoying thus itself with
Our perpetual torture,
Hence, we,
Disappointed by Time's unhurried stance,
Absorbed by its immobility, 
Let ourselves sink deeper and deeper into our hopelessness,
Till we reach the deepest point of 
Our being,
A place void of all thoughts, 
Of absolute silence and of intense 
Anguish!

At that point
We wish to:
To shout
To scream
To yell 
To howl 

But 

No voice is possible to be heard. 
No one is there to listen to our call of distress. 
And then
In the darkest hour of solitude, 
At the culminating point of desolation,
When we thought all is lost, we realize to our surprise that
We are not alone,
WE WERE NEVER ALONE! 
A tenant is there with us, 
A tenant, beyond the limits of ourselves,
Of our understanding,
Of our awareness,  
A tenant who looks at us with affection
With compassion and most of all 
With love,
Unconditional love, 
True Love,
Yes, it is HIM
The ONE and ONLY
HE who was there before us 
And 
Will be here into eternity 
After we are gone: GOD HIMSELF!

We look at His Holy visage, and we discern an 
Apologetic expression for 
Having put us through this tribulation to be able to make
HIS presence to us, known!
He had tried before to approach us on many occasions,
During the period of our good fortune,
Of our successes and our achievements
But
We had ignored HIS calls at that time,
You see, we didn’t need any help then,
For
We thought everything was our doing and that
Everything was under our firm control.

You see, my friend,
We had the erroneous idea that
We were INVINCIBLE
However
Events in our life, from time to time, prove to us 
That 
Our invincibility is just an illusion! 

 



© Demetrios Trifiatis
      13 JUNE 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/23/2013 9:27:00 AM
Demetrios, your poem is incredible with such great inspiration for hope and faith. Such powerful lines and the most spectacular for me is "But Time – a sadist- unmoved stays Mocking us And instead of picking up speed he Is dragging his leaden feet, enjoying thus himself with Our perpetual torture," The content magnificently stated :)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/23/2013 2:56:00 PM
Thank you so very much my dear Karen. The poem may be not bad BUT the experience is terrible you would agree!
Date: 6/13/2013 3:14:00 PM
Youth seems to think it is invincible but how we learn as we get older that we are not invincible and that we don't have anything under our control..Great lines that you have penned..Truth you have spoken..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 6/13/2013 2:48:00 PM
We seem to have lost touch my friend. I will try to rectify tht after or big move next Tuesday! Best wishes, Jack xoxox
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Date: 6/13/2013 11:41:00 AM
Desperation and faith are well described in these verses. It is true that people recognizes divinity when needs it. Above any desperation we must be men and women loving even tribulations to be INVINCIBLE
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/13/2013 1:10:00 PM
Thank you Mario very much for your gracious visit!
Date: 6/13/2013 9:16:00 AM
This is a truthful and awesome revelation for those in severe depression or loneliness (usually go hand and hand)...we definitely need to look up to Him at all times not just when we are desperate! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/13/2013 1:14:00 PM
Thank you Russell! You are a good friend and a great person!
Date: 6/13/2013 6:28:00 AM
Oh, my dear poet...who a depth of though and expression....what beautiful truth. I needed to read this. Yes, HE is there all the time. I'm so touched by this. God bless you!!!!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/13/2013 1:18:00 PM
Always a joy your visit is! Your comment I almost wait with impatience! Thank you so much!
Date: 6/13/2013 5:06:00 AM
a very deep and honest poem of love and loss. So glad I read this today excellent pend dear Demetrious one for favourites Shadow xox
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Date: 6/13/2013 1:21:00 PM
My dear shadow, this has been written for those of us who have been through the hell of loneliness! Only if someone goes through that can understand the meaning of it in its whole intensity! Thank you for your kind visit and comment!

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