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Living Waters
He holds the pitcher very high As liquid pours into the bowl. With the baby’s parents standing by The pastor has a starring role. Preparing to baptize their son, He tells of God’s abiding love. He picks the sweet child up when done And asks for blessings from above. The parents are gazing on with pride. Their happiness with us they share. Not once has their tiny infant cried As our pastor gives him back with care. Though it was not the child’s decision, This sprinkle of the Holy Bath, We parishioners pray that his baptism Will start him on a righteous path. Won #6 by: Joyce Johnson 9/20/11 for Francine's Flowing Water contest

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Date: 10/3/2011 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Flowing Water" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2011 4:27:00 AM
Interesting poem here cousin Joyce, well done in the contest...
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Date: 10/1/2011 2:08:00 AM
Such a unique approach, Joyce, and I love the spiritual quality of this write. Sure, the infants usually cry, but it is the welcoming of God into a child's life that brings parents joy. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/1/2011 1:52:00 AM
Great poem and a new and refreshing idea, Lee
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Date: 10/1/2011 12:46:00 AM
Lovely verse Joyce. A well deserved win. Congratulations
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Date: 9/30/2011 11:45:00 PM
Congrats on your 6th place win, Joyce! Kim
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Date: 9/30/2011 11:03:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on a wonderful win in flowing waters with lovely poetry my friend..luv..
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Date: 9/30/2011 10:54:00 PM
Joyce , I was so pleased to see this different take on the contest, congrats on your 6th place win in the contest
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Date: 9/19/2011 5:16:00 PM
good luck in the contest p.d.
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Date: 9/19/2011 4:42:00 PM
this is nice,best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/19/2011 4:31:00 PM
a memorable scene in faith Joyce and stunning lines commemorating this blessed event.. exquisite my friend..good luck...
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Date: 9/19/2011 2:55:00 PM
Very nice, Joyce. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 9/19/2011 2:49:00 PM
That is so true..We hope that will be the path for this child and every child...As a family, at least it is a step in the right direction...Sara
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