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Liven My Heart

If you could see the inside of me Around my heart where it internally bleeds It sits there shattered on the pieces past All alone in the shadows in darkened cast For many a year in dormant lie It's been so long to hear it's cry To feel the touch of a woman so Liven my heart and watch it glow If you could see the inside of me There lies a dormant heart so beautifully It sits there shattered on the pieces past Sleeping it may be, how long will it last http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-13.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/28/2010 1:15:00 PM
Don't let your heart "sleep" too long, James. When you are awake, it is filled with great passion and we need more of that in this world. Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/28/2010 11:57:00 AM
I love this James a little sad but brilliant. You have a great heart and you tend to write from your heart even when you try not too ;) hope you will have a fabulous weekend ;-)
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Date: 10/28/2010 1:29:00 AM
Once again just perfect sarah xx
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Date: 10/28/2010 12:37:00 AM
We all could see that beautiful heart which writes so wonderfully,One magic touch,dormant no more and you'll write once again so passionately,Have a great day dear friend!Celene.
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Date: 10/27/2010 3:14:00 PM
well, i hope it will not last long. This has a great melancholy feel to it, James. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/27/2010 8:31:00 AM
Very enjoyable poem, James
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Date: 10/27/2010 3:01:00 AM
For some there will be a rude awakining, .....just how lonely...life can be ! Great write Sir ! much love, james
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Date: 10/26/2010 10:38:00 PM
wonderful poetry James, just wonderful
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Date: 10/26/2010 8:03:00 PM
James this is so sad, Would you believe me if I said I relate to this. Close you eyes, now invision that beautiful castle on the hill. Smell the heather and listen to the meadow larks... yes,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, wonderful write--so sad as always Shar
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Date: 10/26/2010 3:34:00 PM
sad write, well written James!
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