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Little People In Your Hair

A stranger walked up and motioned You have moving things in your hair I felt and sure as there's a heaven There were five tiny folks living there Invited them down so we could talk They reluctantly climbed onto my hand The language they spoke wasn't english It was foreign but I could still understand I asked them how did they get up there They said they rode in on the wind To help the world be a better place And on me, their hopes they've pinned They arrived ten thousand years ago Until now they've been searching in vain Maybe, just maybe the time has come We'll get back to the start once again We'll live and love without any question Of colour, of country, of creed In a world with such joy and devotion No corruption or killing, no greed I promised to try with all of my heart To help people understand The only thing really important in the world Is the love of our dear fellow man © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 9/2/2014 2:22:00 PM
Good stuff, Jack. Something it wouldn't hurt for us all to try. Bless you my friend. Jim
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/3/2014 6:35:00 AM
Hey Jim! Thanks a bunch for your kind words... much appreciated! Cheers to you my friend!
Date: 8/31/2014 4:20:00 AM
Jack, my philosopher friend, what a jewel of a writing is this? Profound message that makes me regret for having no hair for some of these friends of yours make it their home! I think we all need these fantastic friends of yours to put some sense into our heads! Marvelous writing!
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Date: 9/1/2014 8:26:00 AM
You are too too kind my dear ex-Montrealer!!! Canada misses you!
Date: 8/30/2014 12:40:00 PM
Wow a very deep write leaves one pondering Jack ! But if it's practically so, do u really need a doctor ?? Knock knock!
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Date: 9/1/2014 8:25:00 AM
Sometimes I wonder... I never know myself what this strange brain will come up with next! LOL Huggsies XOXOX
Date: 8/30/2014 10:16:00 AM
Red Rover... Red Rover... Send the Little people over... For Dragon wants them, for him, to meet. He wants them to guide his Super Hero ways... I think they'd be crispy by next week... But never fear I am here... And will suggest they meet him, only, by phone... Then watch out world... as Dragon lets go... to save the world... from our home... You always wind that poor Dragon up... I think you do it on purpose! And it's worth every moment watching him... So keep up the good work!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/1/2014 8:24:00 AM
Gotta get my old beano checked... this one was weird! LOL XOXOX
Date: 8/30/2014 9:27:00 AM
:) You have such an imagination, Kenny! Cute...Hugs
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/30/2014 9:37:00 AM
:) You have such a loving heart, Betty Boop... huggsies back! Kenny XOXOX
Date: 8/30/2014 8:56:00 AM
Wonderful Jack but I think you need Head and Shoulders..lol
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/30/2014 9:01:00 AM
Gave me a chuckle, my friend! Happy Saturday!

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