Little Miss Spring

They say it's a time to slip in the mud, and begin anew.
Kick off the dust of yester ...
      and put on the dress of Yes Sir! and Thank You Ma'am
She sure is a joy      This baby little season
And like moths to a flame we praise her name

(we don't need a reason)

And who can blame the helpless admirers
trigger happy on their Kodaks
drunk with Marigold Merriment.

No matter your profession, everyone's a poet,
when spring comes along, like a child, showing off her dandelion face,
believing in her curious way that death has been conquered.

But reality comes in firehouse red,
with silver sickle blades that say, No can do, Little Miss Spring,
not every bird, on every branch, has a song to sing.
The fact of the matter is ... you're just another three months
(Winter? Autumn? They're simply taking an overdue lunch,
but they'll be back with the same fire      The same ice)
Hate to break it to you, Sweetie, but not everything nice
is destined to remain (it's a cyclical thing ... you understand)

You can bet your slender green stem
even Little Miss Spritely has her down days,
but like teenage hysteria     it's just a phase

(we can just pretend those zits are poppies
they smell fragrant enough)

And yes of course      It's a time of LOVE!
Young and Fresh --- Tongue and Flesh
like good ole Elmer Fudd would say

(bweeding like wabbits)

Oh Little Miss Spring, surely you can't have everything!
Green grass and blue sky --- it's halfway sickening
the way you steal the show with your sunny splendor.
And Poor Old December ... you left him in the cold,
bragging up your warmth and innocent demeanor

(I saw what you did to the snow)

It can all be forgiven though      Truly it can!
I know it might feel like I'm freezing you out

            (but all the cool months are doing it)

... 'tis no excuse      you saw through my ruse
I'm just killing time before the Melancholy Mob
comes back into town.
Remember how they used to hang around Stick in the Mud Lane
poking holes into your joy?

(they annoyed me too)

And what became of the pessimists, the argument-ists,
the I-don't-believe-in-all-this kinda crowd?
Are they all hibernating somewhere like Mother Grizzly?

(If you ask me they can take all advice from this soda pop
fade and fizzly)



Written March 15th, 2016
For the Spring Contest Hosted by Catie Lindsey

Poem of the Day: March 18th, 2016

Placed 8th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 10, 2016 at 12:39 AM
Hello, Tim, I'm just here passing by enjoying your poem of the day. I like this joyous write, sweet and fun. LINDA
Dalei Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 3:03 AM
Very nice creation. Truly impressive.......hugs
Hicks Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 9:50 PM
Thank you very much, Manmath!
Vaso Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 10:35 AM
Congrats on POTD!! Very creative write!
Hicks Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 9:21 PM
Thanks Arthur!
Cheema Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 9:55 AM
Congrats Timothy! You're swaying with the spring!
Hicks Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 9:08 PM
Thank you Balveen! Spring is a joyful season (as well as a humorous one) :)
Raven Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 11:16 AM
Hi Tim, excellent once more, we have ignition, let us just flow into your song of Spring. There are always those humorous twists in your work that i Love. This poetic songis no exception Tim. I Love the way you dance to your own tune. Well Tim, this has to be a seven and also, it goes into my faves....Vlad.
Hicks Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 8:59 PM
Honored, Vlad! I enjoy humor, and am happy to pass on the giggles ... your comments are always insightful and entertaining, dear friend.
Roper Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 9:41 AM
Timothy, another wonderful write a7 and congratulations on your win!!!
Hicks Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 8:45 PM
Thanks Eve! :)
Haight Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 7:55 AM
Back again, Tim, to congratulate you on your win in Catie's contest! Sandra
Hicks Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 8:37 PM
Thanks Sandra. Much appreciated :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 3:54 AM
'drunk with Marigold Merriment' lines like this and others make your poem shine with humor and a delight to read. I can see why this was POTD! Congrats on that and on your placement in the contest. Kudos Timothy! ; ) Connie #7
Hicks Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 8:35 PM
Thank you Connie! I always try to have fun when I write :)
Chircop Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 8:44 PM
Fantastic poem, A definite fave.
Hicks Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 9:40 PM
Thank you very much Charmain! :)
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 1:48 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. (yesterday :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hicks Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 11:41 PM
Much appreciated, Anne ... you as well!
Dutta Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 1:16 AM
Congrats Eve for the beautiful Poem of The Day. Love. Anisha
Hicks Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 11:11 PM
Why thank you Anisha ... however my name is not Eve, though Eve just recently had a Poem of the Day as well ... perhaps you were thinking of that, while commenting on this! Lol ...
Nance Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 8:38 PM
Grats! A great poem for poem of the day.
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 8:50 PM
Thank you Casarah!
Haight Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 7:58 PM
Hi Tim, congratulations on your outstanding poem being honored as Poem of the Day! Love it! Sandra
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 8:50 PM
Thanks Sandra!
Davey Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 7:05 PM
you really are a great writer Timothy, congrats on pod
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 8:46 PM
Thanks Brian ... I appreciate it!
Smith Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Tim, congratulations on POTD, most deserved...
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 7:12 PM
Thanks Charlie!
Ashe Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 10:49 AM
"Stick in the mud Lane"...that visual is forever! :-) Apropo choice for this upcoming season for POTD! Write On to you!
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 7:08 PM
It's the place where pessimists congregate. Thanks for the lovely comment, my friend.
Smith Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Congrats Young Tim : )
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 6:12 PM
Thank you Tim! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 8:47 AM
What a great choice for POTD. Congrats Timothy!
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 6:06 PM
Thank you Richard ... I am excited once again :)
Inman Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 8:43 AM
Excellent write Timothy. Wonderful smooth flow and thought filled words. Enjoyed reading it this morning.
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 6:05 PM
Thank you kindly James!
Lane Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 6:44 AM
This poem belies your age. Your young mind doth go into the most entertaining and delightful worlds. Thank you for sharing what you see there with those of us who cannot fathom what your mind imagines, Tim.
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 5:59 PM
Your lovely comment was a treat to read, Lin ... happy to open the door to interesting places ... And everyone is invited as far as I am concerned :)
Quigley Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 5:52 AM
Very enjoyable! Congats on your POTD!
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 5:54 PM
Thanks Mr. Quigley :) Wasn't aware until you told me .... I'm positively delighted.
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 6:54 PM
You are insanely clever, my friend. I am so glad you are back here in FULL force. Love your stuff and this is one more example why.
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 1:49 AM
Thanks Andrea! Good to be back ... :)
Peterson Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 10:00 AM
Timothy, you are so original in language and form. There's a fresh surprise in every line. I cannot express well enough what joy it is to read your work. Good luck with this one.
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 1:30 AM
Thanks for the quality comment Mr. Mark. Appreciate you stopping by and giving your thoughts.
White Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 12:53 AM
Hahaha love the innuendos and the comical portrayal of little miss spring the she devil. Well done.
Hicks Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 9:05 PM
The she devil .... that is Great! Lol! Spring never considered Winter's feeling when she took the snow away ... quite rude! Thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Wow! What magnificent gem with so much pleasantries, and back and fourth tease; and images busy as bees. A+ You top the chart of winners already.
Hicks Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 8:55 PM
You read it well (with rhyme too). Thanks so much your encouragement and support! I had loads of fun with this one :)
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