Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Little Miss Muffet

Little Miss Muffet loved her curds and whey,  
give me a box of cereal with cold milk and I will be on my way.  
Along came a spider,  
I bet they did not bring a glass of cider.  
Little Miss Muffet should pick her friends better,  
how about getting an English Setter.  
Be careful who your friends are,  
or you will not go very far.

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Marikate Kingston April 29, 2024 at 12:20 PM This made me smile. It was so witty. I used to read occasional nursery rhymes to my daughter when she was little and to this day, I call her Miss Muffet sometimes, even tho' she is 22. Where was the Irish Setter when he was needed? Tsk, tsk. I heard spiders don't share, NO FAIR! Paula Goldsmith April 30, 2024 at 12:05 PM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my fun/cute "Little Miss Muffet." The old children's stories are the best. You are right, spiders don't share but English Setter do.... Have a blessed day...............................

Linda Alice Fowler March 25, 2024 at 12:23 PM Haha Paula. Cute one! Congratulations! hugs :) Paula Goldsmith March 27, 2024 at 1:31 PM Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you like my fun/cute "Little Miss Muffet." It was fun to write. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away................

Miranda Hawley March 22, 2024 at 8:20 PM For sure the dog will be a far better friend to Miss Muffet than the spider would or could ever be. Congratulations on your win in my contest! Paula Goldsmith March 23, 2024 at 9:18 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you like my fun "Little Miss Muffet" write. Oh yes, a dog is a much better friend than any spider could ever be. I enjoyed writing this one for your contest. Thanks for having it/for the placement. Enjoy your weekend... Have a blessed day writing away.................

Valsa George March 21, 2024 at 10:16 PM This is quite interesting dear Paula. Congratulations on your great win. Have a great weekend....! Paula Goldsmith March 22, 2024 at 9:58 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Little Miss Muffet" write. It was fun to bring to life. Enjoy your weekend... Have a blessed day writing away.................

Paula Goldsmith March 20, 2024 at 8:06 AM "3 Place" ~ Little Miss Muffet~Date Written: 2/15/2024

Karen Jones February 29, 2024 at 7:28 AM Ha love your witty take on this nursery rhyme! Very clever indeed. Paula Goldsmith March 1, 2024 at 12:10 PM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you love my witty take on this nursery rhyme write "Little Miss Muffet." It was fun to write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Jennifer Proxenos February 23, 2024 at 9:16 AM Another clever write my friend - good luck in the contest Paula. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Paula Goldsmith February 24, 2024 at 11:31 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Little Miss Muffet" write. I enjoyed bringing it to life. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Sotto Poet February 20, 2024 at 2:22 PM Very well crafted poem, Paula, your subject matter along with your imagery are commendable. Good luck with the contest Paula Goldsmith February 21, 2024 at 8:07 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed my fun write "Little Miss Muffet." Friends/friendships are important. I thought this was the perfect one to talk about it. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Silent One February 18, 2024 at 12:36 PM You did this one really well my friend.. Best of luck in the contest... Paula Goldsmith February 21, 2024 at 8:04 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your best of luck. Glad you enjoyed my fun write "Little Miss Muffet." I thought this poem was perfect to talk about friends/friendships. Watch out who they are... Have a blessed day writing away.................

Brandy Nicole February 17, 2024 at 4:29 PM Dear Paula, an interesting take on this nursery rhyme. There's a little humor within, with words of wisdom too. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy Paula Goldsmith February 21, 2024 at 8:02 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun write "Little Miss Muffet." I thought this one was perfect to talk about friends/friendships. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 17, 2024 at 12:09 PM I enjoyed reading this charming version of the beloved nursery rhyme, Paula. Best of wishes for the contest. Evelyn :) Paula Goldsmith February 21, 2024 at 8:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Glad you found my fun "Little Miss Muffet" write to be a  charming version. I thought it was perfect to talk about friendships. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Jerry Brotherton February 16, 2024 at 5:39 PM A creative take on Miss Muffet. Paula. Paula Goldsmith February 17, 2024 at 7:23 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found this to be a creative take on my fun "Little Miss Muffet" write. It was fun to write... Have a blessed day writing away.................

Valsa George February 15, 2024 at 10:15 PM You have given an interesting version of Little Miss Muffet the popular nursery rhyme. Enjoyed reading it! All the Best dear Paula if it is for a competition! Paula Goldsmith February 17, 2024 at 7:20 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your best. Yes, for a contest. Glad you enjoyed my interesting version of my "Little Miss Muffet" fun write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Beryl Edmonds February 15, 2024 at 5:59 PM A splendid alternative to the ‘Litte Miss Muffet’ nursery rhyme Paula. All the blessed best… Beryl Paula Goldsmith February 17, 2024 at 7:10 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun write "Little Miss Muffet." I enjoyed bringing it to life. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Joseph May February 15, 2024 at 3:28 PM I enjoyed this fun story of Miss Muffet, Very nicely done Paula Paula Goldsmith February 17, 2024 at 7:03 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun write/story "Little Miss Muffet." Have a blessed day writing away.................

Sara Kendrick February 15, 2024 at 3:09 PM Good one that has sprung from Little Miss Muffet from long ago. Thanks for sharing it with us. If it is for the contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara K Paula Goldsmith February 17, 2024 at 6:24 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my fun write "Little Miss Muffet." Yes, for a contest. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Constance La France February 15, 2024 at 1:35 PM Paula, love your poem, some wise words here ! Picking friends can be tricky, sometimes they hide their true essence that is only revealed in time, then we have to purge them from our life as they are toxic to our well being and that is emotional, hugs, Constance Paula Goldsmith February 17, 2024 at 6:22 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you love this and found my fun "Little Miss Muffet" write to have some wise words. You are so right. Many friends can Not be trusted. Time will show their true colors. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2024 at 12:33 PM - Choosing friends can be difficult ... at least one you can trust ... a great poem, Paula :) - If it's for a contest, I wish you luck with a win :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith February 17, 2024 at 6:07 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your luck. Yes, for a contest. Glad you enjoyed my fun write "Little Miss Muffet." In life we have many friends but Not many one can trust. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away.................

Paula Goldsmith February 15, 2024 at 12:01 PM Little Miss Muffet~Date Written: 2/15/2024