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little man's eyes -

I see it, little one ...
in the magic of your eyes -
'tis the world, blooming wondrous!
bright, dazzling dreams of a midday meadow
a softened sweep of butterfly wings, azure-bound
the warm, wobbly mud of a May puddle
and a kiss, stolen from your cheek
by a sweet smile in pinafore and pigtails

oh, how your absinthe gaze dances,
splattered with tendrils of shimmering gold ...
a million mercurial meanderings, borne
alighting like fireflies on the weeds of your thoughts,
and tickled by the breezes of possibility -
"what if?" they whisper ...
answers blossom in your mind like rare orchids
all that is imagined, and all that beyond!

little man, so dear ...
such fearsome, fine enchantments await -
you are a book of perplexity and blank pages
that time and love and learning wait to write upon ...
a grand tome of course and experience -
the splendid circus and surreptitious story, Life
that twirls and prances in your eyes
and whose magnificent, mysterious, marvelous conclusion ...

I will leave ... to you.







~ 3rd Place ~  in the "2 To 12" Poetry Contest, Beth Evans, Judge & Sponsor.

~  For my Grand-nephew, Killian ... all my hopes, little man.  ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Rodrigues Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 6:11 PM
Congratulations, dear Greg! Love: By a sweet smile in pinafore and pigtails.
Barden Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 8:19 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Kim - blessings! :o) <3
Na Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 12:31 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Greg
Barden Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 8:19 PM
Thank you very much, Gregory! :o)
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 7:59 PM
superb poetry, so magical, Greg. Big congratulations to you.
Barden Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 8:19 PM
Thank you so very much, Andrea - blessings! :o) <3
Mcintosh Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 6:20 AM
Wonderfully expressed. Impressive write. Blessings to you, Gina
Barden Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 9:31 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Regina, that's very thoughtful of you to say! Blessings, My Friend! :o) <3
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