Little Brown Feet

On quiet days in mid autumn 
When sun and clouds play ‘peek-a-boo’ 
Somber thoughts linger in crisp air
Of some other time and place where 
Harmattan winds in December create 
A hazy fog of dust and sand  
Draping the sun from dawn to dusk

I hear sounds of children’s laughter 
Singing ‘Ring around the Roses’ 
Playing ‘Na fo’ and ‘jumping rope’
No one took note the birds were silent
No one had seen them fly away
No one recognized the warning
Soon horror and mayhem would ensue

Little brown feet tender, yet fast
Pound the earth skipping, jumping
Lean and strong; weaving in and out
Through serpentine reeds of brown and green 
Dust clouds rise, burst with each tap
Happy voices chanting a local jingle
‘Who bucks it takes it... free rope”

On quiet days in mid autumn
When leaves of Oaks and Elms
Brown, red, yellow, gold and rust 
Carpet concrete sidewalks   
Rustle loudly beneath my feet 
I still hear eerie sounds of wailing 
Of children’s terrifying screams

In some other time and place where  
Harmattan winds creep south 
Like an iniquitous invading force
Bringing in chill and fog of powdery sand  
Then sudden sounds of terror assault the ears 
Trembling in shock powerless to move
Little brown feet melt with nowhere to run 

They huddle behind walls of mud bricks 
Others dash towards the woods 
Leaving broken flip flops and tennis shoes
Scattered on fields of dust 
Through thickets, shrubs and razor grass
Little brown feet bare running scared
Now bruised and bleeding unaware

Hades’ orchestra plays its symphony 
Emitting a cacophony of sounds
Mortars falling! Red-tail rockets sailing!
RPGs rip and the AKs unrelenting rat-ta-ta-ta….
While Harmattan winds like a steam engine blows 
Long hard fierce and cold 
Little brown feet will skip no more



A tribute to the Children of Liberia (Liberian Civil War - December 1989-2004)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 16, 2013 at 5:27 PM
Annalise, How are you this lovely evening? :-) Congratulations with having your awesome poem featured on the soups home page.... sending hugs. Hope you are enjoying this day with your family. always & forever *LINDA
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September 21, 2011 at 2:57 PM
Congrats Annalise on second place win with this wonderful write luv..
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September 21, 2011 at 9:33 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest Annalise. Love, Carol
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September 20, 2011 at 10:43 PM
Oh, wow....this hurts with sadness, with truth and power. A great poem, Annalise...a well deserved win!
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September 20, 2011 at 10:13 PM
Powerful Write! Congrats on your 2nd place win. Kim
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September 20, 2011 at 9:01 PM
excellent writing VIVID truthfull, heartbreaking, necessary write congrad's light & love
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September 21, 2011 at 6:50 PM
Thanks for the honor, Deb. I appreciate your kind comments also. Love, Annalise
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October 23, 2009 at 7:54 PM
This is so sad and heart wrenching Audrey. My very heart grows so tender, as tears fill my eyes. Your awesome write has accomplished it purpose. Sincerely, Love Moses God bless, Have a nice weekend.
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October 17, 2009 at 11:08 AM
The children of war, so many kids are being used worldwide to be armed in conflict before thay have enjoyed their childhood, it's so tragic. Beautiful poem Audrey >> James
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October 12, 2009 at 6:57 PM
wow! very moving! Audrey!... and thank you for your gracious comments... jim
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September 29, 2009 at 4:43 PM
Beautiful verse I must say! This is just amazing - ed
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September 29, 2009 at 9:39 AM
You have a fan here Audrey. This poem is truly a ~~~Magnificent Poem~~~. Thank you for writing and sharing it with us. It is one of the best poems I have read today and the tears are still wetting my cheeks.. Love, Carol
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September 29, 2009 at 6:20 AM
How sad. Brings to mind the horrors of war. Why can we not live in Peace? Beautifully penned with easy flow and excellent imagery. Thank you and thanks also for your kind comments. Love, Meg.
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September 28, 2009 at 5:45 PM
Very Good-Poetic and Poignant with Tears not far behind reading... Excellent Write Audrey... and Unfortunately... so True... You handled this topic very well MoonBee
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September 28, 2009 at 4:03 PM
good job...keep writing
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September 28, 2009 at 4:02 PM
This i enjoyed reading, sad as it was. x
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