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Little Brown Feet

On quiet days in mid autumn When sun and clouds play ‘peek-a-boo’ Somber thoughts linger in crisp air Of some other time and place where Harmattan winds in December create A hazy fog of dust and sand Draping the sun from dawn to dusk I hear sounds of children’s laughter Singing ‘Ring around the Roses’ Playing ‘Na fo’ and ‘jumping rope’ No one took note the birds were silent No one had seen them fly away No one recognized the warning Soon horror and mayhem would ensue Little brown feet tender, yet fast Pound the earth skipping, jumping Lean and strong; weaving in and out Through serpentine reeds of brown and green Dust clouds rise, burst with each tap Happy voices chanting a local jingle ‘Who bucks it takes it... free rope” On quiet days in mid autumn When leaves of Oaks and Elms Brown, red, yellow, gold and rust Carpet concrete sidewalks Rustle loudly beneath my feet I still hear eerie sounds of wailing Of children’s terrifying screams In some other time and place where Harmattan winds creep south Like an iniquitous invading force Bringing in chill and fog of powdery sand Then sudden sounds of terror assault the ears Trembling in shock powerless to move Little brown feet melt with nowhere to run They huddle behind walls of mud bricks Others dash towards the woods Leaving broken flip flops and tennis shoes Scattered on fields of dust Through thickets, shrubs and razor grass Little brown feet bare running scared Now bruised and bleeding unaware Hades’ orchestra plays its symphony Emitting a cacophony of sounds Mortars falling! Red-tail rockets sailing! RPGs rip and the AKs unrelenting rat-ta-ta-ta…. While Harmattan winds like a steam engine blows Long hard fierce and cold Little brown feet will skip no more A tribute to the Children of Liberia (Liberian Civil War - December 1989-2004)

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Date: 6/16/2013 5:27:00 PM
Annalise, How are you this lovely evening? :-) Congratulations with having your awesome poem featured on the soups home page.... sending hugs. Hope you are enjoying this day with your family. always & forever *LINDA
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Date: 9/21/2011 2:57:00 PM
Congrats Annalise on second place win with this wonderful write luv..
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Date: 9/21/2011 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest Annalise. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2011 10:43:00 PM
Oh, wow....this hurts with sadness, with truth and power. A great poem, Annalise...a well deserved win!
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Date: 9/20/2011 10:13:00 PM
Powerful Write! Congrats on your 2nd place win. Kim
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Date: 9/20/2011 9:01:00 PM
excellent writing VIVID truthfull, heartbreaking, necessary write congrad's light & love
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Audrey Haick
Date: 9/21/2011 6:50:00 PM
Thanks for the honor, Deb. I appreciate your kind comments also. Love, Annalise
Date: 10/23/2009 7:54:00 PM
This is so sad and heart wrenching Audrey. My very heart grows so tender, as tears fill my eyes. Your awesome write has accomplished it purpose. Sincerely, Love Moses God bless, Have a nice weekend.
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Date: 10/17/2009 11:08:00 AM
The children of war, so many kids are being used worldwide to be armed in conflict before thay have enjoyed their childhood, it's so tragic. Beautiful poem Audrey >> James
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Date: 10/12/2009 6:57:00 PM
wow! very moving! Audrey!... and thank you for your gracious comments... jim
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Date: 9/29/2009 4:43:00 PM
Beautiful verse I must say! This is just amazing - ed
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Date: 9/29/2009 9:39:00 AM
You have a fan here Audrey. This poem is truly a ~~~Magnificent Poem~~~. Thank you for writing and sharing it with us. It is one of the best poems I have read today and the tears are still wetting my cheeks.. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2009 6:20:00 AM
How sad. Brings to mind the horrors of war. Why can we not live in Peace? Beautifully penned with easy flow and excellent imagery. Thank you and thanks also for your kind comments. Love, Meg.
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Date: 9/28/2009 5:45:00 PM
Very Good-Poetic and Poignant with Tears not far behind reading... Excellent Write Audrey... and Unfortunately... so True... You handled this topic very well MoonBee
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Date: 9/28/2009 4:03:00 PM
good job...keep writing
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Date: 9/28/2009 4:02:00 PM
This i enjoyed reading, sad as it was. x
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