LISTEN to the Wind

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For the Listen to the Wind Contest of Constance La France/ Sept. 5, 2025

Weather: Wind - Let's Talk Science

"If you reveal your secrets to the wind, you should not blame the wind for revealing them to the trees." - Kahil Gibran Listen to the wind; it has many sounds. Does it roar, rush, gust, swoosh, hum, thump or wail? It can whisper innocently or bay like hounds. If you groan or whine, wind may mimic you, moaning or muttering. It might even howl like a wounded troop that is dying to pass through or like a soul battered by words and deeds most foul. Antagonized too much, a tempest wind can be - swirling violently – almost incessantly. Listen to it; wind can be much like you and me. But just as we can hear the wind, can you believe that maybe – just maybe – the wind has ears as well? What if it knows US? What secrets might it tell? Listen to the wind as it moves through grass and reed. Does it carry secrets in each gentle breeze as it breathes and rustles leaves upon the trees? People like to say that Zephyr whispers. How fitting it would be if secrets wind has heard live always within nature – each and every word!

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Date: 9/8/2025 10:34:00 AM
Great quote to get the ball rolling on your piece...Congratulations on a first place piece personifying the Wind so thoroughly.
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Date: 9/8/2025 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. What a great picture you have here. Have a blessed day with your win...........
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Date: 9/7/2025 8:58:00 PM
The changes in the wind's sound are beautifully enlisted here as howl, murmur, wail, groan, whine etc. A beautifully composed poem, Andrea. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 9/7/2025 8:22:00 PM
This wind feels grand as it touches my poetic skin with many delights. Beautiful. Call didn't work out but I made it here and I'm glad this was posted. Love, CayCay
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Date: 9/7/2025 2:07:00 PM
Love your usage of Onomatopœiæ Andrea. It really brings your words to life. I feel like sitting outside quietly to just listen to what it sings. :)
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Date: 9/7/2025 6:39:00 AM
So beautiful, Andrea, A fav for me.
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Date: 9/7/2025 3:35:00 AM
love the musicality and depth of your wind poem, andie!
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Date: 9/6/2025 11:53:00 AM
Hello Andrea, oh, i love the sound of the wind. When the wind blows the leaves are dancing to the beat. it is a relaxing sound. it is soothing to make me sleep. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Date: 9/6/2025 10:15:00 AM
Love the quote and the excwllwnt poem. GL in contest.
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Date: 9/6/2025 6:17:00 AM
love the initial quote....in fact, this poem is exquisite with beautiful imagery and deep thoughts. I agree...secrets remain within nature. We're entwined more than we realize.
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Date: 9/6/2025 5:07:00 AM
Very beautiful! Engaging write. Lots of insight, I think, into what the wind may think, and why it has so many intensity of different voices. You may have winner here. Good luck in contest.
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Date: 9/6/2025 3:03:00 AM
Well written poem on the wind Loved it Kevin
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Date: 9/5/2025 10:50:00 PM
So many facets of wind, may be she well share her secrets with us :)
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