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Listen To the Warm

"It happens just because we need to want, and to be wanted too...when love is here or gone to lie down in the darkness and... listen to the warm.” -Rod McKuen

My reflective moments of me and you rush through my mind tonight. Like crashing waves upon a sandy shore, your love warmly washes over me, making me want and need you more. No, it wasn't love at first sight. I struggled with falling in love at all. I didn't think I could love someone when I was still trying to love myself. But you...you said you loved me when our eyes first met. I hope you didn't regret that, or me for not knowing where my heart was trying to lead me. Your warm and gentle, "I love you," took me by surprise. Oh how you must have been hurt by the look on my face when I heard you whisper those words. You knew what you wanted; I only knew that the warmth and sincerity of your emotions left me chilled with fright.. desperate to catch my breath, I pulled away. I didn't know what I wanted, not at first. But being apart for days left me even colder. My want of you outweighed my fear, and soon our wants and needs blended together. It's been many years since I've thought about our wobbly start... well, my wobbly start that nearly kept us apart. When you took my hands in yours, you also took my heart. My love, thank you for bringing light to my darkness, for keeping a calm repose as we counted fingers and toes of our babes, and for teaching me to listen to the warmth. Through our laughter and tears, and for loving me all these years, you are the only love I've ever known in my life, so thank you, my darling, for wanting and needing me as your wife. I'm still listening to the warm ~ with want and need. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ April 17, 2016 Laura Loo's "Listen to the Warm" contest
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Williams Gault Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 1:16 PM
My goodness, this read like it was from the core of your heart. Just pure, and certainly painted with love's warmth. Congratulations!
Lane Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 3:16 PM
Thank you very much.
Cheema Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 4:46 AM
Lin, congrats on your wonderful top most placement in Laura Loo's Listen To The Warm Prose contest!
Lane Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 3:15 PM
Thank you
La France Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 10:47 PM
this is so beautifully penned and full of love, congrats on your wonderful win
Lane Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 3:15 PM
~ Thanks ~
May Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 9:56 PM
Wow...this is just beautiful...you put your heart into this poem Lin...Congrats on your win
Lane Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 9:59 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph ;)
Parker Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 5:58 PM
congratulations on your win.... seems like the right choice was finally made ... fear was overcome
Lane Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 9:32 PM
Hi Frederic. Thanks so much.
Grahamburglar Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 12:58 PM
Congrats on your placement in the contest. I think you did a great job of capturing the essence of the quote. I don't know if this was a true story or not, but it feels very sincere, and I think that's what makes it such an endearing write. Easy 7 from me. -G
Lane Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 9:31 PM
Your comment is so nice to read, G. It's not based on reality...just an idea I have for writing a short story. Thank you.
Smith Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 11:47 AM
I felt the warmth from your words, congratulations Lin, we all won with your write...
Lane Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 9:29 PM
You're so sweet, Charlie, Thanks a bunch.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Oh Lin, this poem filled my heart with warmth. I love how it weaves its way into lasting happiness. Beautiful! # 7. ; ) Congratulations on your first place win!
Lane Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 9:29 PM
Thank you very much, Connie.
Grasso Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Congratulations on your first place win Lin. Beautifully written....Fran
Lane Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 9:28 PM
Hello, Fran, and thank you.
Raina Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 10:03 AM
Lin, your poem is simply Awesome.....congratulations on your first placement....I guess I am going to read it again after posting this comment.
Lane Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 9:27 PM
Thanks, Meenakshi. Sweet comment.
Roper Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 8:53 AM
Congratulations on your win, Lin! When we have been broken it is hard to move on with our lives with another. Wonderful write :-)
Lane Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 9:27 PM
Thank you, Eve.
Scars Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Lin, I loved this. I loved the tiny rhyme in the first stanza, thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your top placement :)-luloo
Lane Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 9:27 PM
Thanks, Laura and also for hosting. Glad you liked it.
Quigley Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 10:54 PM
Beautiful write! Sounds like our early days from my wife's POV...
Lane Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 8:15 AM
I envy you those early days, and even more that you're love goes on. Thanks for liking this one, Tom.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 8:12 AM
Absolutely beautiful. This truly warmed my heart. The best poem I have read today. This should be poem of the day.
Lane Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 8:32 AM
How sweet you are to leave such kind comments. Thanks so very much, Rick.
Ashe Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 6:27 PM
Reading this Lin made me "listen to the warm!" The title is "warmly" captivating! :-)
Lane Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 8:34 PM
Hi, Walter, and thanks for liking this one. I hope you feel the warm, too.
Chircop Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 2:28 PM
SO Beautiful!!!
Lane Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 2:31 PM
Many thanks to you for liking this one, Charmaine.
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