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she ate less food thought was good way she could lose weight so she drank beers now appears drunk she lears through slits face all puffy skin has grey tone wrong way to slim penned 18/2/2016

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Date: 3/16/2016 7:42:00 AM
Than-Bauk written in style..Congrats on your winner..Sara
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Date: 3/15/2016 5:47:00 PM
Seren, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/13/2016 7:09:00 PM
Congratulations for your win , Seren
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Date: 3/11/2016 8:08:00 AM
Hi Seren, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.
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Date: 3/11/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thank you Vlad.....Seren
Date: 2/19/2016 9:44:00 PM
great job with this challenge, Seren. Hope you are doing well in life..
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Date: 3/11/2016 8:50:00 AM
Thx Andrea am in hospital at moment been here a week. Home in a few days.....Seren
Date: 2/19/2016 7:36:00 AM
as one who struggles with weight, I can appreciate the humor here. Her face like quiche or a souffle. Nice, Seren.
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Date: 3/11/2016 8:50:00 AM
Thanks so much ....Seren
Date: 2/19/2016 1:39:00 AM
Ha ha of course Seren.. lovely!!
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Date: 3/11/2016 8:51:00 AM
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Date: 3/11/2016 8:51:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by....Seren

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