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I’m a limited edition, when all is said and done Nothing special, only unique in a maze of humdrum Kill spiders for a pastime, coz I hate their beady eyes Watching me try to sleep, as they paralyse butterflies I’m a limited edition, pulling cobwebs from beams In great physical shape, yet mentally challenged it seems Guilty of every known sin, with mitigation of course They are all in my head, except when I use fatal force I’m a limited edition, preprogrammed to survive From one day to another, til next time I’m not revived Still it’s great to be alive, from a dead man’s point of view I certainly possess one, in a preserve this mind grew I’m a limited edition, my pets couldn’t care less Well possibly they do, but look up to me nonetheless Take me as you find me on any given occasion Whisper sweet nothings, I’m a sucker to soft persuasion I’m a limited edition, light Cola makes me cringe And hate drinking alcohol, unless going on a binge Alas I cannot find god, he’s hidden away in reams Leaving himself subjective, to idealistic extremes I’m a limited edition, playing Russian roulette Will even up the ante, fill the chamber, rig the bet It’s a no brainer, literally speaking anyway With just sawdust to lose, all so easy to blow away By David Kavanagh

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Date: 5/13/2024 2:40:00 PM
David Kavanagh laid bare (in the best possible taste, of course). I would say you have a much better grip on your own mind and reality than many which surely does indeed make you a limited edition. Congrats on POTD, David. Terry
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Date: 5/13/2024 3:19:00 PM
Heya Terry, Temet nosce (know thyself) it’s probably more important than trying to know what makes others tick, yes my limited edition (was done in the best possible taste) as Kenny Everett used to say lol! Thanks for stopping by with fun comments and congrats, cheers
Date: 5/13/2024 2:31:00 PM
Belated Congrats on POTD “David John” your very clever Limited Edition!! Debx
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Date: 5/13/2024 3:04:00 PM
Heya Deb, David J yes but not John, now there’s a limited edition hint on one of my middle names, Deb M hmmm! Lol, thanks so much for stopping by cheers David
Date: 5/13/2024 10:35:00 AM
It seems most of the fine books are out of print and are just a limited edition whereas most of the banal and hack writing are now in their tenth and eleventh printings. You're a limited edition and all the better for it! Congratulations on POTD! My best, Robert
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Date: 5/13/2024 11:45:00 AM
Ain’t that the truth Robert, what’s happening to the western world, I’ll stick to my own limited edition, and keep an open mind on everything else going on around me, thanks so much for stopping by with congratulations, cheers David
Date: 5/13/2024 7:45:00 AM
You are a limited edition. You are enough. Love that opening verse. Also the ending “with sawdust to lose.” I could say much about God, but won’t do it here. Your expression of feelings is okay with me. Great write, dear David! Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 5/13/2024 8:51:00 AM
Thank you Kim, the way you worship God is honest and genuine of that I have no doubt, see my response to Anaya below about that line, I’m delighted you enjoyed my limited edition even the sawdust lol! Cheers David
Date: 5/13/2024 7:16:00 AM
I'll take limited editions any day David. They're quite valuable you know ;) Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
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Date: 5/13/2024 8:33:00 AM
I guess they are Linda, me I’m no more valuable than the next man or woman, but as individuals we’re all limited editions, thanks so much for stopping by, cheers David
Date: 5/13/2024 2:25:00 AM
My congrats on your POTD. A great tongue-in-the-cheek poem.
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Date: 5/13/2024 2:42:00 AM
Tongue in cheek is a fair comment Victor, although layers of me are being exposed here, no facade, I feel life is truly fickle on a day to day basis, cheers David
Date: 5/13/2024 12:14:00 AM
A great limited edition David, a humorous read. Congratulations on receiving poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 5/13/2024 2:37:00 AM
Heya Beryl, I’m delighted you see there is humour in this one, perhaps a little dark but it’s there nonetheless, such is life! Thanks for stopping by, cheers David
Date: 5/12/2024 11:17:00 PM
Many congratulations David with POTD. This is a great read and so well written. Very clever poetic lines and unique. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing :):)
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Date: 5/13/2024 2:34:00 AM
Heya Christina, I always love to hear the read went down well, and it is great to share life experience from a personal pov, rather than trying to influence others with some agenda, thank you so much for the wonderful critique, cheers David
Date: 5/12/2024 6:24:00 PM
Hello David, What a journey through the intricacies of self-awareness, acceptance, and defiance against societal norms. I loved how the imagery of battling spiders and embracing imperfections is revealing layers of vulnerability and resilience. Your artistic words echo the universal quest for meaning, identity, and purpose. Congratulations on being recognized as Poet of the Day; your voice is a rare gem amidst the noise, a testament to the power of authenticity in a world of conformity. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 5/13/2024 2:28:00 AM
Thanks so much Daniel, we all need to be authentic to ourselves in this world of conformity, of course whilst obeying the law of the land, I’m so lucky to live in a democracy that allows freedom of expression, I really am vulnerable and resilient all at once, I think the juxtaposition in this one enhances that point beyond doubt, each day can be the breaking or making of me, high praise from you, cheers David
Date: 5/12/2024 5:47:00 PM
An entertaining, clever and engaging poem David....your creativity on display much to the delight of us readers. Great lines...skilfully executed work. Deserving POTD recipient. Take care my friend.
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Date: 5/13/2024 2:14:00 AM
Thank you Paul, I’m delighted you found this one entertaining and engaging, makes my efforts all the more worthwhile, High praise! cheers David
Date: 5/12/2024 4:57:00 PM
Congratulations, David.. on a terrific win and getting poem of the day. Very dramatic and well penned! Celebrate your honour! Pangie Romios.
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Date: 5/13/2024 2:08:00 AM
Thanks Pangie, I’m delighted with this one getting POTD, I think that drama naturally exudes when juxtaposing lines, well spotted my secret is out lol! Cheers David
Date: 5/12/2024 3:00:00 PM
Congratulatiions. David on your POTD. Lots of great lines to savor and re read over, Cheers, SuZ
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Date: 5/12/2024 3:49:00 PM
Thank you kindly SuZ, to get POTD after a little break from the soup was unexpected and uplifting all at once, I’m delighted you deem it worthy of some rereads, cheers David
Date: 5/12/2024 12:41:00 PM
Back with congratulations on POTD! Traits of truth, best policy! "Alas I cannot find god, he’s hidden away in reams Leaving himself subjective, to idealistic extremes" your unique poetic view on life leaves this reader speechless. A huge Cheers!
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Date: 5/12/2024 1:18:00 PM
Thanks so much for returning with congratulations Anaya, that particular line may seem controversial to some, but with so many extreme interpretations of texts in various religions, I think it’s justified, I’m delighted you see the bigger picture in that one, (to leave you speechless is high praise) cheers David
Date: 5/12/2024 9:39:00 AM
Telling it like it is for you, David. Good for you, and congratulations on your poem being chosen the POTD, my friend! Enjoy your special day of recognition! Bill
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Date: 5/12/2024 10:56:00 AM
You are right Bill, this is purely my perspective and limited edition on life, we all have our own, thank you so much for stopping by with congrats, cheers David
Date: 5/12/2024 8:41:00 AM
What a creative potd congratulations David!
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Date: 5/12/2024 10:53:00 AM
Heya Karen, I’ll take creative as high praise and bank it, you’re very kind, cheers David
Date: 5/12/2024 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful POTD win. I enjoyed reading your very creative "Limited edition" write again. Have A Wonderful/Blessed Weekend Writing Away With Your Win.........
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Date: 5/12/2024 10:52:00 AM
Welcome back Paula, and thanks for the second read, always great to receive POTD honours, especially with this type of personal perspective on life, cheers David
Date: 5/12/2024 6:30:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Very nicely done
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Date: 5/12/2024 10:49:00 AM
Thank you Joseph, I’m delighted with the honour and your visit, cheers David
Date: 5/12/2024 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem of the day! Bringing the everyday into it's own special view. Beautiful work :)
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Date: 5/12/2024 10:48:00 AM
Delighted to meet you Kate, and thanks for the kind comment on how I perceive life from day to day, I’m sure though we all have our own special/unique view, cheers David
Date: 5/12/2024 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD honour, Dear David. Really enjoyed your poem - very distinct style - "Limited Edition" for sure. Best wishes ~
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Date: 5/12/2024 10:42:00 AM
Thank you Mala, for recognising my style as distinct, I always try write from my own pov, at least that way I’ll know if I’m lying to myself lol! Cheers David
Date: 5/12/2024 5:55:00 AM
A very clever poem that well deserves POTD. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/12/2024 10:38:00 AM
Heya Hilda, all about perspective, and trying to be honest with myself, cheers David
Date: 5/12/2024 5:02:00 AM
David, I enjoyed your limited edition poem, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 5/12/2024 10:33:00 AM
Thank you Tania, an extremely limited edition, for better no definitely worse lol! Cheers David
Date: 5/12/2024 3:24:00 AM
loved the title and your words; congrats on POTD!
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Date: 5/12/2024 4:41:00 AM
Heya Sara, (Limited edition) has a few interpretations, but trust me I’m nothing special, just independent, and trying to make sense of the complexities of life, thank you so much for the visit, cheers David
Date: 5/12/2024 2:49:00 AM
Woohoo! Congratulations on receiving the POTD :D I love the juxtaposition of vulnerability and strength in this. Your ability to convey what it is to be human with complex thoughts yet expressed in a straightforward manner is a pleasure to read. Poems like this are what poetry is about for me.
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Date: 5/12/2024 4:34:00 AM
Thank you Dilly Dally, I’m sure your Fave helped this one achieving POTD status today, yes it’s all about juxtaposition of vulnerability and strength, our humanity resides somewhere in between, I do try be straightforward about how I perceive life, and if I can put it all together into a half decent poem, that people like you enjoy it’s a very humbling experience, cheers David
Date: 5/12/2024 2:39:00 AM
Poem of the Day, now I'd say that makes you a Special Edition. Congratulations, David. Deserving of another G & T. Cheers!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 5/12/2024 4:19:00 AM
Heya Lin, A special edition for a day, yeah I’ll take it and thank my lucky stars, of course I’ll celebrate it with a Limited edition G&T later on, cheers David
Date: 5/12/2024 12:50:00 AM
Back with congratulations to you David on today's POTD honour. Enjoy your day. Tom
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Date: 5/12/2024 4:16:00 AM
Thank you Tom, you’re the bearer of good news today, I’m humbled and delighted to achieve POTD honours, cheers David
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